A huge cherry tree grew outside, so close that its boughs tapped against the house, and it was so thickset with blossoms that hardly a leaf was to be seen. On both sides of the house was a big orchard, one of apple trees and one of cherry trees, also showered over with blossomes; and their grass was all sprinkled with dandelions.
Spring is coming!He suddenly has an idea of walking on the grass,holding the backpack,carrying a camera and snack,walking on the wilderness all day long, to look for the footprint of spring.
English to Chinese:
A huge cherry tree grew outside, so close that its boughs tapped against the house, and it was so thickset with blossoms that hardly a leaf was to be seen. On both sides of the house was a big orchard, one of apple trees and one of cherry trees, also showered over with blossomes; and their grass was all sprinkled with dandelions.
Spring arrived. An idea came into his mind suddenly. He wanted to go for a spring outing, by his own, putting on a backpack and taking a camera and foodstuffs, to hike in the wilderness all through the day, and to look for the footprints of spring in the expanse of the countryside.
英汉:
A huge cherry tree grew outside, so close that its boughs tapped against the house, and it was so thickset with blossoms that hardly a leaf was to be seen. On both sides of the house was a big orchard, one of apple trees and one of cherry trees, also showered over with blossomes; and their grass was all sprinkled with dandelions.
Where is the spring? It is in the picture taken by your eyesight. It is on the footprint left alone with the green grass. Let’s go and search for it, carrying on the backpack with some snack and your idea. Let’s go and search for it, dissolving yourself into the wildness with the breeze drifting in the space of nature.
English to Chinese:
A huge cherry tree grew outside, so close that its boughs tapped against the house, and it was so thickset with blossoms that hardly a leaf was to be seen. On both sides of the house was a big orchard, one of apple trees and one of cherry trees, also showered over with blossomes; and their grass was all sprinkled with dandelions.
Spring is here! He suddenly had a thought, go hiking! He thought about putting on his backpack with his camera and food, going hiking in the wilderness for the whole day, looking for the footprints of spring.
English to Chinese:
A huge cherry tree grew outside, so close that its boughs tapped against the house, and it was so thickset with blossoms that hardly a leaf was to be seen. On both sides of the house was a big orchard, one of apple trees and one of cherry trees, also showered over with blossomes; and their grass was all sprinkled with dandelions.
Spring is here! An idea suddenly came into his mind: why not going out for a hike in the vast Spring filled fields! Bringing a camera, water, and some snacks, I could go on a Spring-hunting day trip. :)
English to Chinese:
A huge cherry tree grew outside, so close that its boughs tapped against the house, and it was so thickset with blossoms that hardly a leaf was to be seen. On both sides of the house was a big orchard, one of apple trees and one of cherry trees, also showered over with blossomes; and their grass was all sprinkled with dandelions.
Spring is coming!An idea suddenly jumps out of mind, he wants to go on an outing in spring, carrying a backpack, bringing a camera and food, and walking the whole day in the wilderness alone, looking for the footprints of spring in the wide world.
English to Chinese:
A huge cherry tree grew outside, so close that its boughs tapped against the house, and it was so thickset with blossoms that hardly a leaf was to be seen. On both sides of the house was a big orchard, one of apple trees and one of cherry trees, also showered over with blossomes; and their grass was all sprinkled with dandelions.
Spring is around the corner! All of sudden, he has the urge to go hiking alone. Packing some snack and taking the camera, he spent a day in the wild, and looked for signs of spring in nature.
English to Chinese:
A huge cherry tree grew outside, so close that its boughs tapped against the house, and it was so thickset with blossoms that hardly a leaf was to be seen. On both sides of the house was a big orchard, one of apple trees and one of cherry trees, also showered over with blossomes; and their grass was all sprinkled with dandelions.
So spring was here! Suddenly an idea hit upon him, that he wanted to go on an outing. Alone with his backpack, camera and snacks, marching a whole day in the great outdoors to find the footprints of spring.
English to Chinese:
A huge cherry tree grew outside, so close that its boughs tapped against the house, and it was so thickset with blossoms that hardly a leaf was to be seen. On both sides of the house was a big orchard, one of apple trees and one of cherry trees, also showered over with blossomes; and their grass was all sprinkled with dandelions.
He wanted to go for a spring outing, by his own, putting on a backpack and taking a camera and foodstuffs to hike in the wilderness all through the day, and look for the footprints of spring in the expanse of the countryside.
Spring was here! He suddenly came up with an idea that he would like to go hiking. Packing some snacks and bring the camera, he marched in the wilderness for a whole day to find the footprints of spring.
Thegovernment planned to build another metro line across the city, hoping to reduce the traffic congestion during the rush hour. 为了缓解高峰时段的交通拥堵,政府计划再建一条穿过市区的地铁线。
He wanted to go for a spring outing alone, taking a backpack, a camera, and some snackes and hiking in the wilderness all through the day, to look for the footprints of spring in the expanse of the countryside.
Happy Friday Everyone!
Today we have our first translation practice since the spring equinox In 2021. We are going to have some fun with a few sentences releated to spring .
I don't have 标准answers. We will learn from each other and come up the answers based on everybody's wisdom.
Chinese to English:
春天来了!他心里忽然生出一个想法,想要去踏青,一个人背上背包,帶上照相机和干粮,在旷野中行进一天,在广阔天地间寻找春天的脚印。
English to Chinese:
A huge cherry tree grew outside, so close that its boughs tapped against the house, and it was so thickset with blossoms that hardly a leaf was to be seen. On both sides of the house was a big orchard, one of apple trees and one of cherry trees, also showered over with blossomes; and their grass was all sprinkled with dandelions.
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🛋️ 沙发板凳
汉译英:
Spring has arrived!
Suddently, an idea popped up in his mind,
going out for a Green-Hike, (我瞎编的)
One man, one bag,
camera and ration,
A whole day's walk in the wilderness,
Searching for traces of Spring.
English to Chinese:
屋外巨大的樱桃树,如此之近,树枝敲打在房子上,花是如此的浓密完全遮盖了叶子。房子的两侧都是果园,
一边苹果园,一边樱桃园,树上,都象是落下了花雨,地上,蒲公英散落在草间。
https://www.wenxuecity.com/news/2021/03/24/10425427.html
春天来了!他心里忽然生出一个想法,想要去踏青,一个人背上背包,帶上照相机和干粮,在旷野中行进一天,在广阔天地间寻找春天的脚印。
Spring is coming!He suddenly has an idea of walking on the grass,holding the backpack,carrying a camera and snack,walking on the wilderness all day long, to look for the footprint of spring.
English to Chinese:
A huge cherry tree grew outside, so close that its boughs tapped against the house, and it was so thickset with blossoms that hardly a leaf was to be seen. On both sides of the house was a big orchard, one of apple trees and one of cherry trees, also showered over with blossomes; and their grass was all sprinkled with dandelions.
外面生长着巨大的樱树,树枝离房子很近,覆盖着房子,花朵繁密,几乎看不到一片叶子。房子两旁是很大的果园,一边是苹果树,一边是樱花树,花枝招展,草地上点缀着蒲公英。
汉英:
春天来了!他心里忽然生出一个想法,想要去踏青,一个人背上背包,帶上照相机和干粮,在旷野中行进一天,在广阔天地间寻找春天的脚印。
Spring arrived. An idea came into his mind suddenly. He wanted to go for a spring outing, by his own, putting on a backpack and taking a camera and foodstuffs, to hike in the wilderness all through the day, and to look for the footprints of spring in the expanse of the countryside.
英汉:
A huge cherry tree grew outside, so close that its boughs tapped against the house, and it was so thickset with blossoms that hardly a leaf was to be seen. On both sides of the house was a big orchard, one of apple trees and one of cherry trees, also showered over with blossomes; and their grass was all sprinkled with dandelions.
屋外生长着一颗高大的樱花树,因为离得太近,它的树冠都触碰到了房檐。茂盛的花朵致密得几乎不见了树叶。房屋的两边各有一片园林,一个是苹果园,一个是樱桃园,皆是花香四溢,还会看到草坪上尽是蒲公英散布其间。
春天来了!他心里忽然生出一个想法,想要去踏青,一个人背上背包,帶上照相机和干粮,在旷野中行进一天,在广阔天地间寻找春天的脚印。
Where is the spring? It is in the picture taken by your eyesight. It is on the footprint left alone with the green grass. Let’s go and search for it, carrying on the backpack with some snack and your idea. Let’s go and search for it, dissolving yourself into the wildness with the breeze drifting in the space of nature.
English to Chinese:
A huge cherry tree grew outside, so close that its boughs tapped against the house, and it was so thickset with blossoms that hardly a leaf was to be seen. On both sides of the house was a big orchard, one of apple trees and one of cherry trees, also showered over with blossomes; and their grass was all sprinkled with dandelions.
伟大的鲁迅曾经写下一篇有关门前枣树的散文,于是留下了类似“哥德巴赫猜想”的无数个疑问,让读者让老师让学生前赴后继绞尽脑汁殚精竭虑地思索钻研,为何“一棵是枣树,另一棵也是枣树”。
鲁迅笔下的枣树是在门前,这里的果园是在屋子的两旁,一边是苹果树,另一边是樱桃树。但我不曾看见,由此也无从想象落英缤纷是何种的景象。只有摸索着记忆,想起一首歌这么唱道:摇摇洁白的树枝,花雨满天飞扬,落在妈妈头上,飘在纺车上。。。。。。。
Chinese to English:
春天来了!他心里忽然生出一个想法,想要去踏青,一个人背上背包,帶上照相机和干粮,在旷野中行进一天,在广阔天地间寻找春天的脚印。
(纠正了之前用的过去时)
Spring is here! He suddenly had a thought, go hiking! He thought about putting on his backpack with his camera and food, going hiking in the wilderness for the whole day, looking for the footprints of spring.
English to Chinese:
A huge cherry tree grew outside, so close that its boughs tapped against the house, and it was so thickset with blossoms that hardly a leaf was to be seen. On both sides of the house was a big orchard, one of apple trees and one of cherry trees, also showered over with blossomes; and their grass was all sprinkled with dandelions.
一棵巨大的樱桃树离房子很近,粗大的树枝拍打着房子。树上的樱花开得正浓,令人几乎看不见一片树叶。房子的两边被一个果树林环绕着,一棵苹果树和一颗樱桃树上开满了花;草地上撒满了蒲公英。
Chinese to English:
春天来了!他心里忽然生出一个想法,想要去踏青,一个人背上背包,帶上照相机和干粮,在旷野中行进一天,在广阔天地间寻找春天的脚印。
Spring is here! An idea suddenly came into his mind: why not going out for a hike in the vast Spring filled fields! Bringing a camera, water, and some snacks, I could go on a Spring-hunting day trip. :)
English to Chinese:
A huge cherry tree grew outside, so close that its boughs tapped against the house, and it was so thickset with blossoms that hardly a leaf was to be seen. On both sides of the house was a big orchard, one of apple trees and one of cherry trees, also showered over with blossomes; and their grass was all sprinkled with dandelions.
屋外有一棵很大的樱桃树, 离房子很近,主干贴着房子, 花丛繁茂,几乎不见绿叶。房子两边都有果园,其中一棵苹果树和一颗樱花树繁花倾泻(一个苹果园和一个樱桃园,满园繁花倾泻);蒲公英星星点点地点缀着果园的草地。
Chinese to English:
春天来了!他心里忽然生出一个想法,想要去踏青,一个人背上背包,帶上照相机和干粮,在旷野中行进一天,在广阔天地间寻找春天的脚印。
Spring is coming!An idea suddenly jumps out of mind, he wants to go on an outing in spring, carrying a backpack, bringing a camera and food, and walking the whole day in the wilderness alone, looking for the footprints of spring in the wide world.
English to Chinese:
A huge cherry tree grew outside, so close that its boughs tapped against the house, and it was so thickset with blossoms that hardly a leaf was to be seen. On both sides of the house was a big orchard, one of apple trees and one of cherry trees, also showered over with blossomes; and their grass was all sprinkled with dandelions.
一棵巨大的樱桃树枝繁叶茂, 枝条拍打着房屋, 它开满了浓密的花朵, 几乎看不到一片树叶. 在房屋的两侧是一大片果园, 林中的一棵萍果树和一棵樱桃树也是花瓣飞扬; 草地上点缀满了蒲公英.
Chinese to English:
春天来了!他心里忽然生出一个想法,想要去踏青,一个人背上背包,帶上照相机和干粮,在旷野中行进一天,在广阔天地间寻找春天的脚印。
Spring is around the corner! All of sudden, he has the urge to go hiking alone. Packing some snack and taking the camera, he spent a day in the wild, and looked for signs of spring in nature.
English to Chinese:
A huge cherry tree grew outside, so close that its boughs tapped against the house, and it was so thickset with blossoms that hardly a leaf was to be seen. On both sides of the house was a big orchard, one of apple trees and one of cherry trees, also showered over with blossomes; and their grass was all sprinkled with dandelions.
屋外, 一棵高大的樱树昂然傲立, 枝桠攀延紧贴屋檐, 开出累累繁花, 密密的遮住了树叶。 屋子的两侧则种植着硕大的兰花, 苹果树, 樱桃树, 正值花季, 满树缤纷。 草地也被星星点点的蒲公英装点,显得生机勃勃。
Chinese to English:
春天来了!他心里忽然生出一个想法,想要去踏青,一个人背上背包,帶上照相机和干粮,在旷野中行进一天,在广阔天地间寻找春天的脚印。
So spring was here! Suddenly an idea hit upon him, that he wanted to go on an outing. Alone with his backpack, camera and snacks, marching a whole day in the great outdoors to find the footprints of spring.
English to Chinese:
A huge cherry tree grew outside, so close that its boughs tapped against the house, and it was so thickset with blossoms that hardly a leaf was to be seen. On both sides of the house was a big orchard, one of apple trees and one of cherry trees, also showered over with blossomes; and their grass was all sprinkled with dandelions.
窗外是一颗巨大的樱桃树,紧靠着房子,树枝都能拍打到房墙;满枝樱花繁茂,竟不见一片绿叶。房子两侧都是果园,一个种满苹果树,一个全是樱桃树,双双鲜花满枝;两边果园的草地上有蒲公英点缀其间。
翻译不需要与原文一一对应。意译而不是字译。可以大胆地改变句子结构,增加或减少句号个数。你的英译汉很好,汉译英可以调整一下句子。我瞎说,我自己不知怎么译比较好。但有几位同学做的不错。我们可以学习,参考。上周云海大师说的很好。
【一点体会】中文行文,句子常较松散,逗号一大串,其实已经说了若干个意思。英文则每句只有一个(或一组)主语,一个(或一组)谓语。汉译英时需要分析一下,当断则断。而且中文行文常常暗换主语,英译时要小心。
我的英语语法都快忘光了。想了了半天不知道这句话的语法结构。
He wanted to go for a spring outing, by his own, putting on a backpack and taking a camera and foodstuffs to hike in the wilderness all through the day, and look for the footprints of spring in the expanse of the countryside.
I like your 汉译英。
春天来了!他心里忽然生出一个想法,想要去踏青,一个人背上背包,帶上照相机和干粮,在旷野中行进一天,在广阔天地间寻找春天的脚印。
Spring was here! He suddenly came up with an idea that he would like to go hiking. Packing some snacks and bring the camera, he marched in the wilderness for a whole day to find the footprints of spring.
Exp:
Thegovernment planned to build another metro line across the city, hoping to reduce the traffic congestion during the rush hour. 为了缓解高峰时段的交通拥堵,政府计划再建一条穿过市区的地铁线。
果树开满了花,草地上还有蒲公英
远足带着这个简直完美,每个国家军队ration的营养搭配都相当不错,解放军的那个ration居然还是中餐
我语法概念都忘了。这样安排也挺好的。
He wanted to go for a spring outing alone, taking a backpack, a camera, and some snackes and hiking in the wilderness all through the day, to look for the footprints of spring in the expanse of the countryside.
云海老师的翻译更符合标准答案。我就是瞎玩的。不过你如果觉得合适,可以的啊