阅读同一副画

影云
楼主 (文学城)

画: 立

 

用立兄的这一副画来作为诗歌的灵感来源。这一幅画充满了具有喻意的元素,诗意无缝而又超现实地结合在一起。一幅画就是一个人内心世界的风景,浓缩着个人对生命的思考与感受。画中,遥远的海岸线,无所依托的帽子,也是有着一扇门的屋子,自它的窗口(又如同眼睛)伸出一支在凋零与另一支将绽放的玫瑰,在这没有开始与结束的空间里,猩红流溢的色彩与暗色相互照应,有着抑郁与悲壮的美。生命死亡伤口挣扎绽放,永恒的主题。我想起了王尔德的长诗,雷丁监狱的歌谣。

十位来自不同国籍的诗人对这幅画从不同的角度写的诗歌,非常有意思。

选了三首来分享。

Shogun moon   why splatter blood
running away from your body

a sword is a sickle
menacing glean

water sold in a petrol station
five bucks a bottle

half the price from the petrol
you're pumping.....

never gonna fill ya

but when it's
spurting out of your neck

think roses
how they die off

in winter

the bonsai master, snip snip snips you away
and as a butterfly battles out of it's own coffin

you'll come back

but did the world come with you

or are you skating alone
blood streaking your name
across ice   Wilted Flowers   Crimson blood seeps through
the crevices of a broken home
as the flowers living within
begin to wilt losing their petals
in an outward cry for help
from a venomous poison
that corrupted the dehydrated soils.   An evening walk   Where can I walk,
where can I look,
to find again the snows so pure,
then bury I can
these poems i wrote
and clear the ground once more,
for new poems to come to be.

For as I walked,
along the seashore today,
a rose I found lying,
dying
on the side walk,
I loved its petals
dappled with flakes of snow,
and I held it close to my heart,
and I knew without a doubt,
by the light of the reddened moon
and gently held in the arms of the dawn,
it will transform
into a poem
of beauty,
and that will happen
all in the "blink of an eye".
all in the "blink of an eye"
and it will last for eons.    

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唐静安
这幅画能激起心里强烈的不安。
影云
谢谢石头。不,石大王。我们以后都叫大王吧。
影云
的确有如此的感受。
简丹儿
非常特别,水墨画的形式+现代风格的思维。感觉立现在状态特别好,专注创作,沉迷在文学音乐艺术的精神世界里。

真是幸福之人。

影云
的确,能够有创作力与激情就是一种难求的幸福。
唐静安
丹儿,影云你们到楼下听我黏贴的中国歌。
影云
唐静安,你怎么这么谦虚呀?这么动人的歌声不单独帖。这就是我前几日听过的一句话,战争不是谁对,而是谁活下来。
影云
尤其世界杯的时候我想,全世界有几个人会想起俄乌的战士?
唐静安
我一向是谦虚的。我具有中国人的美德。而且我以为大家都是知道这些歌曲的。

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stonebench
好。既然咱说了就算,就再命名个“茶坛小喇叭八卦团”,看看谁愿对号入座:)

唐静安
俄乌之战不过是他们标榜自己人品端方的一个幌子。和其他的为中国人民痛心疾首一样,做过样子了,就够了。自然就忘了。
简丹儿
我们这儿这两天下雪,停工停课,去外面拍雪照,突然想到俄乌战场,那里同样的严寒外还有炮火,年轻的生命如草芥……快结束吧战争