谁说小中男录M一定要进Camp的? 转贴CC的一个案例

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POTPRC
楼主 (文学城)

I got deferred from Caltech, but accepted to MIT! :)

Here are my stats and some stuff from my application for those interested:

Academics & Background
Background: Male, Chinese American from a California Charter school
UWGPA: 4.0, WGPA: 4.3670 (valedictorian, or salutatorian if you include people who transferred in)
SAT: 740 R/W, 800 Math, 20/24 Essay
SAT Subjects: 800 on Math 2, Chinese, Physics, and Chemistry
APs: Chinese (5), World History (5), Calc BC & AB subscore(5), Comp Sci A (5), US History (5), Capstone Seminar (4), English Literature (3), Statistics (5), Chemistry (5)
College Classes/Online Classes: Elementary Statistics, Multivariable Calculus, Analytic Combinatorics, Linear Algebra, Introduction to Differential Equations, Threat of Nuclear Terrorism

4 Activities:
- Boy Scouts (Life Scout, Senior Patrol Leader for over a year)
- Math Club (Founder and President, I create lessons and handouts and teach interesting topics at meetings, such as number theory and geometry. I'm also the founder and coach of my school's middle school section's MATHCOUNTS team and this year I'm adding in our school's ARML team)
- Web Design Club (Cofounder and Copresident, I teach members how to make websites with HTML, CSS, and JavaScript and encourage club participation at Hackathons. Our main goal in this club is redesigning our school website, which should be done by mid-January)
- Varsity Volleyball (I played on my school's Varsity Volleyball team in junior year as the Middle Blocker)

Work Experience: Mathnasium Instructor (I've been working as a Mathnasium instructor since junior year, where I tutor elementary through high school students in math).

Summer Experiences: I spent most of my summers traveling, visiting family, and volunteering. During the summer after junior year I started doing math research with a professor.

Nonscholastic Distinctions: Life Scout (11th grade), Breakthrough Junior Challenge top 10% (11th grade), WINK Leader (10th, 12th grade), Voted most likely to wake up early on a weekend (10th grade), Senior Patrol Leader (11th, 12th grade)

Scholastic Distinctions: 2018 Fall OMO 36th Place (11th grade), National AP Scholar (11th grade), AIME Qualifier (10th, 11th grade), 3rd place in SrcHacks Hackathon (11th grade), 1st place in schoolwide Essay Contest (12th grade)

AMC 10 score: 120, AMC 12 score: 100.5
AIME Scores: 5 (2018), 10 (2019)

Essays:
- For the activity you do simply for the pleasure of it, I wrote about solving puzzles and riddles in my free time.
- For the essay about what MIT program appeals to me, I wrote about the development of my passion for both computer science and mathematics and how MIT's 18C program will allow me to continue exploring both subjects.
- For contribution to community, I wrote about my experience tutoring in freshman year and how my passion for it motivated me to start math club and later work as a tutor.
- For the world I come from, I wrote about being Chinese American and having very different traditions/experiences at home compared to at school and how being in such a diverse mix of environments has fostered my acceptance and appreciation for diversity.
- For something that didn't go to plan, I wrote about running for ASB in my freshman year and how I was disqualified from a miscommunication. I dealt with that by accepting the failure and learning from it and seeking alternatives. I ended up applying for my school's WINK Program instead and was accepted in and since then I've come to enjoy that much more than ASB.

Letters of Rec:
Math teacher/club adviser: 10/10 (I feel like this was by far my best letter of recommendation. I had seen his evaluation sheet for another school before MIT and I was amazed by how positive and well-written his evaluation for me was. He also sent me a note after submitting his that it was the best one he's ever written)
Spanish Teacher: 8/10 (My Spanish teacher's always been really encouraging and helpful to my learning of Spanish and in general. He's very open to giving me advice in life and everything)
Counselor: 9/10 (Even though I've only known my counselor for 4 months when she wrote her LoR, I've been one of her favorite students and she knows me really well for my passion for STEM from the awards I've won)

Additional Information: I included a link to my Quora account, where I've been posting advice and help on math, science, and standardized testing questions for over 2 years. I also attached my video submission for the Breakthrough Junior Challenge which I was super proud of.

Maker's Portfolio: I submitted a Maker's Portfolio containing a 3D graphing calculator program I made while taking Multivariable Calculus. It could plot 3D functions and tangent planes in a rotatable 3D space, and calculate partial derivatives, multiple integrals and surface integrals.

General Advice: Not every school's going to be a perfect fit for you. Personally I felt a strong connection with MIT as I learned about their student culture through their blogs and YouTube channel throughout high school, and as I went through their application process. I felt that their application flowed very nicely with my overall interests and experience in high school and their essays were extremely easy to write for me because many of them fit into my ideals (such as contributing to my community and having something to do purely for the fun of it).
You should strive to get into schools you feel a deep connection to, not just for prestige, and you should really bring out this connection through the essays.
 

金一位
刚录取?看到这个特许学校,有点像下面报喜的来自加州的M爹啊,他娃没大奖,但是校长很给力

California Charter school

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POTPRC
昨天刚贴的
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tigerPriate
没人说一定要进CAMP。CAMP每年一共50人,摊到一届也就十几个。你难道认为M每年应该只录十几个小中男?
a
acreek
这类小中男有多少,能被M录取又有几个?
叶蓁
Boys Scout 和Varsity Volleyball 是很好的加分项?
金一位
可能是同一个娃,这样的巧合不多,好像加州国O奖去M的多
s
study169
不止数学啊!物理,化学,生物,计算机,
a
acreek
运气
t
tigerPriate
除了数学,其他的CAMP规模小,平均每届也没多少。
阿拉拉
这个真心一般啊,没想到M现在招人也这么不靠谱
P
POTPRC
是,也不全是

“At least a dozen people will significantly discuss and debate an application before it is placed in the admit pile.”

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tigerPriate
这个LEADERSHIP很强。那些CLUB都是FOUNDER。
t
tigerPriate
这个不是运气。
t
tigerPriate
这个挺靠谱的。
a
acreek
3
加州阳光123
你是

羊爸?

数与形
进了哪?
c
czhz
没人说一定要进CAMP (真的?可我之前说不一定camp,只要solid profile, 一帮人,包括M家长,骂误导。)
a
acreek
3
s
sunriver
for sure运气比较好。我们这,这样的,或更好的,全部defer。
数与形
top 10包括T5不?
a
acreek
3
a
acreek
3
d
dandinglity
我的天
数与形
最后都没转正?那真是运气没来。去年吗?
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12度圆缺
偏科吗?
t
tigerPriate
这个小孩有两个CLUB FOUNDER, 有Varsity.
N
N.
重灾区?这个在我们这儿,应该是能进了。
金一位
知道不少amo娃拿到y的LL,也许你娃运气不好
成功的兔
+1
数与形
是不是推荐信里老师热情地描述小孩eccentric?
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acreek
不偏。不是一个州的,所以对那个小孩的学校不了解。不知是不是推荐信出了问题,还有可能联系的学校少了些
加州阳光123
是essay 的原因?
白兔妈
这个例子如果是真的,不是打了所有在大喊MIT照顾小中女/小中男女双重标准一个大嘴巴吗?

金一位
听着像那个去O state的金牌印度娃啦,不过那个极度偏科啊
凊荷
学CS到Y做啥?
t
tigerPriate
楼主贴的这个孩子很会写。他描述了很多EC。
金一位
管他

羊爸,猪爸,都是糊涂爸

a
acreek
不是
金一位
知道的是学CS加数学
杜鹃花开123
也许我们认识同一个孩子,去年的?他没报M.从小就非常聪明
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tigerPriate
做PM,管码工啊
凊荷
太差了
金一位
骚瑞,肯定不是,那个是多年前啦,俺是说,是不是和那娃一样偏科,如果不是可能essay推荐信啥出了问题
a
acreek
有可能
凊荷
哈哈

寒碜人哈

阿拉拉
靠啥谱?老实说这样的数学成绩还想去M学数学/CS, 父母/孩子胆子都很大,当然运气和胆子也匹配
金一位
嘿嘿,Y数学不差,如果cs另说
a
acreek
不知道,是我孩子camp 里认识的,知道结果,我们都很震惊
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tigerPriate
特例任何时候都有,怎么打嘴巴了?说男女双标,是从统计上来说。

我们村还过普通小中男, 没有这个孩子这些花招招,也被M早录了呢!

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tigerPriate
就是不能和其他小中男比吗,需要什么胆子?

也进了AIME啊,和大部分女孩,种族AA进的男孩,一点都不差啊。

金一位
嘿嘿,巧了,俺真知道俩Y的小中男去了弯曲FG做software engineer,也许有人说不值得吧,不过这是每个人自己的选择:
a
acreek
不算很重的
凊荷
有几个真学纯数学?
N
N.
那就是运气不好了。别泄气,以孩子这么强的能力,即使不进T5,以后也会很有成就的。我老板

的老板,才30出头,排名100+的州大EE毕业的,小藤博士,干的风生水起的,前途非常光明的样子。

橡树生林
Aime 10 也没几个人,比小中女强多了
金一位
俺娃,可惜T5不要他LOL
阿拉拉
AIME 10啥意思? 10年级进的? 现在小学生都有进的,初中生更是一大把进的啊
凊荷
主要是研究生
a
acreek
+1
a
acreek
谢谢鼓励!
晓曦
AIME 10分,很不错了