【Friends】谢谢美坛的朋友们!

妖妖灵
楼主 (文学城)

Thanks to my friends for finishing such an amazing lyrics in such a short time!

With AI,the lyrics sounds amazing! 君子善假于物也。If we can learn from the music about how AI deals with the arrangement and composition and even vocal and pronounciation,our goal of “寓学于乐” is achieved.:)

I like the following 2 versions,female and male versions. I really love the feel of female version.  I have been thinking of creating a English song like this for a long time...

I'm going to post the accompany music if you are interested in learning it. 

 

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【Friends】

Lyrics written by:

最西边的岛上(岛)

妖妖灵(妖)

暖冬cool夏(暖)

甜虫虫(虫)

 

Composition&arrangement&vocal: AI

 

 

Female version:

 

 

Male version:

 

[verse]
 
The sky is not lonely with clouds‘ company(妖)
 
 
cirrus,cumulus,stratus, nimbus (岛)
 
 
The sun,the moon and stars alternate on the canopy(暖)
 
 
Pisces, Aries, Taurus,Gemini,Sagittarius(妖)
 

[Chrous]
 
Friends are the sun in the rainy day (暖)
 
 
Like the moon illuminating the dark night (暖)
 
 
Friends are the Polar Star when we go astray (妖)
 
 
The glue holding us together during a plight (虫)
 
 

[outro]
 
Friends are books opening doors to new worlds (虫)
 
[End]

妖妖灵
我这次印象最深刻的发音是sagittarius。我肯定是一带而过,可AI把它的rius的两个音节发得如此清晰,学习了
暖冬cool夏
Amazing!! AI太牛了!我喜欢Rap版本!好听, 有variations!
暖冬cool夏
妖mm你编排的真棒啊,这个云啊,星座的名字加上去效果好极了,像那么回事!要请教你怎么用AI?我从来没有用过
妖妖灵
这个AI简直牛得让我目瞪口呆!:)而且我们美坛目的是学英语,有了AI夹持,让我们大家的歌词呈现得这么有意思,会良性循环,
妖妖灵
让我们更琢磨出怎么写更好的英文歌词。我把beacon改成Polar Star就是研究了你前面的日月星及你的歌词,才改成的
暖冬cool夏
刚刚特意拿去给家里那位听,他更喜欢女生版,也说很棒!妖mm我可不可以搬到我的博客里?
妖妖灵
你现在就去suno.ai网站,用gmail 可以login,点击create那个button,选customized模式
暖冬cool夏
Polar Star改得好!整首歌在你的编辑下浑然一体!
妖妖灵
当然没问题!开心暖冬mm喜欢!:)
暖冬cool夏
谢谢妖mm!
妖妖灵
我其实没做什么,就是把咱们的歌词弄整齐,AI就自动生成了。当然什么风格看个人喜欢。你现在去试试,有什么问题问我就好了:)
暖冬cool夏
好,等我有空来试试。多谢!
妖妖灵
至于风格,你可以从最平常的开始练习比如pop,female solo什么的~还有每天给50点,一次用去10点:)
甜虫虫
I like the female version too. I'm impressed :)Thanks!
妖妖灵
那几个云是西岛美眉写出来的,我一看就觉得接得太棒啦!后面顺便就把我们几个人的星座写出来了:)
甜虫虫
I like the simple piano music. I'm still not used to the AI

voice though. It still sounds kind of mechanical to me.:) 

妖妖灵
虫虫‘s final line is 点睛之笔!我就舍不得画蛇添足了:)我一会把伴奏弄下来:)
甜虫虫
How about guiding star?

 I also like those clouds' names and zodic names :) 

妖妖灵
It is good for demo:)Pitch,rhythm are perfect. 我们可以跟AI学:)
妖妖灵
Polar Star是北极星的意思,对吗?有什么不好的吗?:)
甜虫虫
谢谢妖妖!我后来想想那一句确实不好接,想删去了的:)Suno 是ChatGTP的音乐部分?我还没有时间去试试呢
甜虫虫
Definitely. Somwhow, some syllables were cut off at the end

or at the begging of a sentence.

妖妖灵
一切的安排都是最好的安排!我觉得完美!不知道,我从来没用过chatGPT。就直接用这个suno。你试试,一定会觉得新奇!
甜虫虫
Polar Star 是北极星,没有觉得不好。"Take me to your heart" 里面用的是guiding

star :)

妖妖灵
cirrus的开始就cut off了。I may leave a space in the beginning~
甜虫虫
哦,发现自己落伍了。最近两年生活太忙乱了:)
甜虫虫
And the last syllable in the first sentence was cut off too.
妖妖灵
把朋友比做北极星来显出朋友的重要:)
暖冬cool夏
还必须每天去吗?50个点是什么意思?我连chatgpt都没有用过:)
甜虫虫
Nice!
甜虫虫
谢谢妖妖带我们玩:))
妖妖灵
你login之后,每天给你50个credit。发一次指令写歌,用去10个credit生成两首。我也没用过chatGPT~
妖妖灵
我还不知道它能不能修改:)先这么着,等真人自己唱自己修改:)
暖冬cool夏
明白了,多谢!
妖妖灵
谢谢你们跟我一起玩!:)
甜虫虫
哈哈,我刚才去玩了一下。用我以前写的一首诗做歌词,Suno帮我加了bridge 还做了一些修改, 我自己又再做修改。

好玩:)以后有好老师帮我修改了,哈哈

When Doubt Comes In

[Verse]
wu wu wu wu wu

When doubt comes in
Clouds start piling up the sky
Layer upon layer
Till all the lights are out

[Chorus]
Layer upon layer oh Layer upon layer
Lights fading out
Darkness everywhere
Cold without a doubt, no without a doubt

[Verse 2]
No clothes can shield
From the icy breeze
Cold wind's wield
Bringing me to my knees

[Chorus]
Storm is forming oh it is forming
Strong with every spin
Feel it coming
Still
Can't change a thing

[Bridge]
Speak to the storm
Shout out my pain
Eyes on the norm
Won't be driven insane

[Chorus]
Layer upon layer oh Layer upon layer
Lights fading out
Darkness everywhere
Cold without a doubt, no, without a doubt

妖妖灵
哈哈,虫虫好棒!怎么做修改?我还不会呢。
暖冬cool夏
Speak to the storm Shout out my pain!甜mm好诗!
甜虫虫
暖冬谬赞了。这几句是SUNO加的:)我的原诗很简单的。

When Doubt Comes In (2021-09-22 15:26:29)下一个


When doubt comes in
Clouds start piling up the sky
Layer upon layer
Till all the lights are out

It's dark and cold inside and out
No layers of clothes can block the wind
That comes from the cold land

A storm is forming
It's getting stronger every minute
I see it
I sense it
Yet, I can't do anything about it
I can't change the directions

甜虫虫
生成的曲子可能改不了。我是改的歌词然后重新生成歌。第一版的第一个音被吃掉了,我就在前面加了几个wu :)

我想让副歌情绪强烈一点就加了几个重复的句子。SUNO还是蛮聪明的。还有地方不满意的,等我有时间再仔细琢磨一下。

妖妖灵
奥,还挺好玩。我试着把Friends的歌词写进去,由suno生成歌词,它把歌词都剪短了。我还是更喜欢原版歌词的原貌:)
暖冬cool夏
When doubt comes in Clouds start piling up the sky这个铺垫开场很好
甜虫虫
Thank you! I'm glad you think so :)

I don't know much about poems, let alone poem writing:) 

That's why I like free verse poems. One can write anything in any way, haha

甜虫虫
Missed a preposition in the second verse :)