《鹧鸪天》神州梦

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renqiulan
楼主 (文学城)

(词林正韵第二部平声)

一聚兰亭两晋郎:左思研墨右军旁。*
毫端点出云端彩,身外飞来世外香。
龙影舞,凤眉扬,风骚何处不炎黄?
春雷交响英雄曲,古国新民理旧疆。

* 左思,西晋文豪;右军,东晋书圣。

Yán Huáng, personifying Chinese ancestry, may look and sound distant in the past but, in fact, can't be closer to the heart of every Chinese who cares to be forward-looking.

Standing on the broad shoulders of Yán Huáng, today's Chinese have the dawning horizon rising before them.

With vision, a golden age is in sight.

作者:纫秋兰

 

 

盈盈一笑间
一聚兰亭两晋郎:左思研墨右军旁。七律多用典故。这里的典故用得漂亮!晚上好,秋兰。
蓝灵
憧憬晓明,乐观来日。
r
renqiulan
谢谢,盈盈晚上好!
r
renqiulan
谢谢,蓝灵好!过去的改变不了,未来的有待塑造。
蓝灵
"with vision, a golden age is in sight. " I like it.
盈盈一笑间
炎黄can't be closer to the heart of every Chinese
r
renqiulan
Do you believe it?
盈盈一笑间
问好蓝灵。好像在星空见过你。当时帮我回帖的是你吗?:)
r
renqiulan
Yan Huang, in my opinion, is the bedrock of Chinese as
r
renqiulan
a people and China as a nation.
蓝灵
盈盈好!是吗?
蓝灵
In the future, I believe.
盈盈一笑间
有点印象,希望我没记错。再次欢迎来美坛玩。:)
蓝灵
沒关係。感谢盈盈,给美坛带来活力。
r
renqiulan
The present?
蓝灵
In the present, I see Arcus clouds. How can I
蓝灵
believe in Arcus clouds?
r
renqiulan
No, you don't believe in rolling storm clouds. I get that.
r
renqiulan
I believe that we are having the storm before the calm.
蓝灵
So you are an incurable optimist. I get that. Good night!
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renqiulan
I can't be more proud of being an incurable optimist. Hahaha
r
renqiulan
Goodnight, 蓝灵!
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CBA7
左思研墨右军旁,秋兰妙笔左右逢源 :) “毫端点出云端彩,身外飞来世外香”,两端两外世人赞!秋兰好诗,谢谢分享!
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CBA7
秋兰妙用典故,大赞!
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godog
Nice poem,full of positivity.

I appreciate your rooting for the descendants of Yán Huáng.

r
renqiulan
谢谢小西!自问实在习作水平,边写边学而已。情怀倒是足以自珍的。
r
renqiulan
用典,于我是一种得着,尤其是在用得其所的时候。
r
renqiulan
Thank you, godog! Yes, call it sunny side up.
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CBA7
秋兰太谦虚了。