Piano

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楼主 (文学城)

black keys
white keys
touched by
moving fingers that
connected with
a singing heart
metal pedals
kissed by
nodding feet

the sound of music
dancing and flowing in
keys
pedals
fingers
feet
ears
eyes
hair
breaths
air
reaching the hearts
that are listening

Comments from Allpoetry:
Emeline Moche - Your poem is short but so moving, the short words in the second stanzas feel like music!

brandon- - such an incredible write. the flow and imagery were remarkable. thank you for this tight share.



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盈盈一笑间
“such an incredible write. the flow and imagery were
盈盈一笑间
remarkable“. I second this!
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7grizzly
"nodding feet"? I thought only one foot is involved in piano
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7grizzly
like driving a car. No?
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CBA7
Thank you, 盈盈!
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CBA7
Hahaha, good question. FYI, see inside:

 

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爪四哥
咦?中文版呢?
暖冬cool夏
Ask Tim:)) In my memory, only one foot too:))
暖冬cool夏
藏龙卧虎之地!好诗啊!有才!
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CBA7
Good question. 这首诗是灵感闪现后,直接用英文写的,好像英文比中文更能表达那种意境,所以就没有译成中文。
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CBA7
我写双语小诗,有时是先写英文,然后译成中文,反之亦然。有时只有英文版,有时只有中文版,都是跟着感觉走。
盈盈一笑间
藏龙卧虎之地!好诗啊!有才! - 暖冬cool夏
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CBA7
冬夏过奖了,谢谢鼓励。你的网名很有诗意,中西合璧,有创意,欣赏!
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7grizzly
Got it. Thank you!
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renqiulan
I am not a poetry person, but I can feel that,
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renqiulan
between ebony and ivory, you have a spring in your step.
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renqiulan
Who knows? Maybe your Muse was dancing on your piano.
盈盈一笑间
Muse is dancing on the piano. 喜欢这一句!
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CBA7
Such a beautiful line!
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CBA7
秋兰,you're very poetic, a poet better than me.
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CBA7
Thank you for your nice comment.
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CBA7
"you have a spring in your step", so lovely and creative!
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renqiulan
Thank you, 盈盈!
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renqiulan
Thank you, 小西!
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renqiulan
I respectfully disagree with you on this one.
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renqiulan
I really appreciate it.