A fawn to a deer
Author:妖妖灵
Last summer,
she was a helpless lonely fawn,
hiding in the sun-dappled bushes,
with white spots covering her body
for camouflage.
Time flies. One and half years later,
Winter is here.
She becomes a brave deer,
dancing with her slend legs,
with the background music Jingle bells.
All the white spots that used to be on her back
become snow flakes flying in the joyful air.
Revised version by renqiulan:表达更地道,非常感谢他:)
Last summer
hiding in the sunlight-dappled bushes,
Time flies. One and a half years later,
dancing with her slender legs
to the tune of Jingle bells in the background.
All the white spots on her back
are flying off as snowflakes in the joyful air.
移花接木:铲后综合征,post-shovel syndrome
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Unexpected encounter
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视频制作:移花接木
but you might want to smooth out the spelling and grammatical wrinkles.
Here is a revised version for your consideration:
she was a helpless lonely fawn,
hiding in the sunlight-dappled bushes,
Time flies. One and a half years later,
She becomes a brave deer,
to the tune of Jingle Bells in the background.
one and half years
should be
one and a half years
A fawn to a deer
Author:妖妖灵
Last summer,
she was a helpless lonely fawn,
hiding in the sun-dappled bushes,
with white spots covering her body
for camouflage.
Time flies. One and half years later,
Winter is here.
She becomes a brave deer,
dancing with her slend legs,
with the background music Jingle bells.
All the white spots that used to be on her back
become snow flakes flying in the joyful air.
Revised version by renqiulan:表达更地道,非常感谢他:)
Last summer
she was a helpless lonely fawn,
hiding in the sunlight-dappled bushes,
with white spots covering her body
for camouflage.
Time flies. One and a half years later,
Winter is here.
She becomes a brave deer,
dancing with her slender legs
to the tune of Jingle bells in the background.
All the white spots on her back
are flying off as snowflakes in the joyful air.
移花接木:铲后综合征,post-shovel syndrome
https://bbs.wenxuecity.com/mysj/277978.html
Unexpected encounter
https://bbs.wenxuecity.com/mysj/223667.html
视频制作:移花接木
but you might want to smooth out the spelling and grammatical wrinkles.
Here is a revised version for your consideration:
A fawn to a deer
Last summer
she was a helpless lonely fawn,
hiding in the sunlight-dappled bushes,
with white spots covering her body
for camouflage.
Time flies. One and a half years later,
Winter is here.
She becomes a brave deer,
dancing with her slender legs
to the tune of Jingle Bells in the background.
All the white spots on her back
are flying off as snowflakes in the joyful air.
one and half years
should be
one and a half years
one and half years
should be
one and a half years