The first frost came in the night, a clear, scant-started night, when the moon was near its fullness.
Silent, followed the heels of Vibrato (颤音), one of pals in MYSJ and a well known Chinese American poet, I went to AllPoetry, the biggest online publisher of English poetry. I published one of my English poems there then.
How exciting! The short piece got an auto-ranked score for 8.9 and professional similarity 6 of 10. Moreover, several poets left their comments on it. The feedbacks on my poems from readers always mean a lot to me. I knew they were always nice to new comers.
You might think I’m showing off, but I don’t intend to do that. Just for fun, LOL：））
这首诗被AllPoentry选上首页。这里许多朋友见过它的中文版。
Portrait by TweetinGreen
on a strange sky dome using meticulous skill with a calligraphic brush draw an oil painting waves in the vast ocean the dawning and twilight thorny blood paths gullies crisscross
so beautiful a new genre
a shaved face covered with mottled paints and inks heh heh heh grinning in a corner, a cup of tea still jasmine
AllPoetry 评分和评论:
Posted a month ago. immigrants, hope, hardness. Like (12)
Front page pick 17 days ago.
Autorank Total 8.9, professional similarity 6 (of 10), concrete vs abstract 2 (of 2), noun/verb/etc order 0.9 (of 1)
Likes: A white rob, noseringpoems, Alice Z, HBey K, kaye, Ken doll, Stuart Munro, Mumtaz Noori, Dub Evergreen, Kh Ventura, Cozyglow, Kelley Citrin
Alice Z - A beautiful piece with a sense of history. Ken doll - Beautiful well written work. Congratulations on well deserved front page pick, enjoyed a day ago
Mumtaz Noori - Congratulations on FPP, a well deserved piece
Good poem. 17 days ago
HBey K - A wonderful canvas is here described in full eloquence.
Amazing 17 days
Kh Ventura - wonderfully written, such a delightful piece to read, Thank you
Nicely done a month ago
Cozyglow - I love this poem. It’s such a meaningful and vivid portrait of the first generation immigrants. We crossed oceans and treaded thorny paths to come to a new place to seek a dream. We worked hard and overcame a lot of obstacles to get to today’s good life. “ in a corner, a cup of tea still jasmine”, inside, we still have a place for our old lands. Really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing! a month ago
Stuart Munro - Nice subject poetry
Lovely a month ago
Kelley Citrin - I am absolutely obsessed with this poem. The last line felt resilient and hopeful, concise imagery, pretty words. I adore it. Stunning. a month ago
This is a list of Chinese Canadians including both original immigrants who obtained Canadian citizenship and their Canadian-born descendants who are notable, have made significant contributions to the Canadian or international culture or society politically, artistically or scientifically, or have prominently appeared in the news.
The first frost came in the night, a clear, scant-started night, when the moon was near its fullness.
Silent, followed the heels of Vibrato (颤音), one of pals in MYSJ and a well known Chinese American poet, I went to AllPoetry, the biggest online publisher of English poetry. I published one of my English poems there then.
How exciting! The short piece got an auto-ranked score for 8.9 and professional similarity 6 of 10. Moreover, several poets left their comments on it. The feedbacks on my poems from readers always mean a lot to me. I knew they were always nice to new comers.
You might think I’m showing off, but I don’t intend to do that. Just for fun, LOL：））
这首诗被AllPoentry选上首页。这里许多朋友见过它的中文版。
Portrait
by TweetinGreen
on a strange sky dome
using meticulous skill
with a calligraphic brush
draw an oil painting
waves in the vast ocean
the dawning and twilight
thorny blood paths
gullies crisscross
so beautiful
a new genre
a shaved face
covered with mottled paints and inks
heh heh heh grinning
in a corner, a cup of tea
still jasmine
AllPoetry 评分和评论:
Posted a month ago. immigrants, hope, hardness.
Like (12)
Front page pick 17 days ago.
Autorank Total 8.9, professional similarity 6 (of 10), concrete vs abstract 2 (of 2), noun/verb/etc order 0.9 (of 1)
Likes: A white rob, noseringpoems, Alice Z, HBey K, kaye, Ken doll, Stuart Munro, Mumtaz Noori, Dub Evergreen, Kh Ventura, Cozyglow, Kelley Citrin
Alice Z - A beautiful piece with a sense of history.
Ken doll - Beautiful well written work. Congratulations on well deserved front page pick, enjoyed a day ago
Mumtaz Noori - Congratulations on FPP, a well deserved piece
Good poem. 17 days ago
HBey K - A wonderful canvas is here described in full eloquence.
Amazing 17 days
Kh Ventura - wonderfully written, such a delightful piece to read, Thank you
Nicely done a month ago
Cozyglow - I love this poem. It’s such a meaningful and vivid portrait of the first generation immigrants. We crossed oceans and treaded thorny paths to come to a new place to seek a dream. We worked hard and overcame a lot of obstacles to get to today’s good life. “ in a corner, a cup of tea still jasmine”, inside, we still have a place for our old lands. Really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing! a month ago
Stuart Munro - Nice subject poetry
Lovely a month ago
Kelley Citrin - I am absolutely obsessed with this poem. The last line felt resilient and hopeful, concise imagery, pretty words. I adore it. Stunning. a month ago
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这种情况就有些复杂。
第一代叫 Canadian xxx xxx. 有的多以后还认为自己是xxx xxx 国人，仍然可叫Canadian xxx xxx
中国人比较开放最多三代以后就可以叫Chinese Canadian了，
Canadian Chinese. Canadian是形容词了。
出生时除了美国国籍，再没有其它了
This is a list of Chinese Canadians including both original immigrants who obtained Canadian citizenship and their Canadian-born descendants who are notable, have made significant contributions to the Canadian or international culture or society politically, artistically or scientifically, or have prominently appeared in the news.
Canadian Italian.就不要探讨了。 他是好几代移民后裔，出生后就是加拿大国籍，出生后也有回意大利生活经历。
dilemma