交艾茶作业《罗刹海市》含奥地利转音及E翻译

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楼主 (文学城)

欢迎对翻译进行补充,俺以后将试着用英文把这首刀郎的好作品唱出来。在此谢谢艾茶的点歌鼓励,祝everyone here 周末愉快!

《罗刹海市》

罗刹国向东两万六千里

Rotten land east 26 thousand li,

过七冲越焦海三寸的黄泥地

Up Qichong, down under, a tiny yellow mud,

 只为那有一条一丘河

there is one famous yiqiu river.

 河水流过苟苟营

Water runs through the So-so camp.

 苟苟营当家的叉杆儿唤作马户

So-so camp's mama called Horse hu.

 十里花场有浑名

In  brothels land he is so well known.

 她两耳傍肩三孔鼻

She has got big ears and a three-hole nose.

 未曾开言先转腚

 turning her butt before speaking

 每一日蹲窝里把蛋来卧

Every day she sits in cage hatching her eggs.

 老粉嘴多半辈儿以为自己是只鸡

this pinky and old bird thinks she is a chicken.

 那马户不知道他是一头驴

That horse hu doesn’t know he is donkey.

 那又鸟不知道他是一只鸡

that You bird doesn't know she's a rooster.

 勾栏从来扮高雅

Street plays pretend to show elegancy.

 自古公公好威名

Eunuchs always love being rich and fame.

 打西边来了一个小伙儿他叫马骥

from the west end, a young man called Horse Ji.

 美丰姿 少倜傥 华夏的子弟

a Chinese kid looked handsome with shining dress.

 只为他人海泛舟搏风打浪

He worked for other by fighting the wind and waves,

 龙游险滩流落恶地

Overcome danger and lost in the shallow of sin.

 他见这罗刹国里常颠倒

He sees the Rotten land twisted upside-down.

 马户爱听那又鸟的曲

Horse hu loves hearing you bird’s song.

 三更的草鸡打鸣当司晨

The hen(female chicken) at midnight calls for the dawn.

 半扇门楣上裱真情

On the door lintel she expresses true feeling.

 它红描翅那个黑画皮

It paints wings red and skin black.

 绿绣鸡冠金镶蹄

makes cockscomb & hooves look green and gold.

 可是那从来煤蛋儿生来就黑

But since the day of born briquette is not purely cleaned.

 不管你咋样洗呀那也是个脏东西

No matter how you wash, it’s still a dirty looking.

 那马户不知道他是一头驴

That Horse Hu doesn't know he is a donkey.

 那又鸟不知道他是一只鸡

That You bird doesn't know she is a rooster.

 岂有画堂登猪狗

how could Galleries allow pig or dog as guests?

哪来鞋拔作如意

How could shoehorns be used as a jade jewelry?

 爱字有心心有好歹

love has a heart shape it can be good or bad.

 百样爱也有千样的坏

A hundred kinds of love may have a thousand kinds of badness.

 女子为好非全都好

The woman is good but not all are good.

 还有黄蜂尾上针

And there is needle on Wasp's end.

 西边的欧钢有老板

Western Europe has a big steel plant boss

 生儿维特根斯坦

His son name is Wittgen~stein,

 他言说马户驴又鸟鸡

said Horse hu is donkey and You bird the chicken.

 到底那马户是驴还是驴是又鸟鸡

Is Horse hu a donkey or is a donkey a You bird chicken?

 那驴是鸡那个鸡是驴那鸡是驴那个驴是鸡

That donkey is a chicken and that chicken is a donkey. That chicken is a donkey then that donkey is a chicken.

 那马户又鸟

That Horse hu / You bird

 是我们人类根本的问题

is our human’s essential question.

艾茶
沙 - 果然等来了你奥地利还是俄罗斯的360度弹舌大转音!还附带英文翻译。厉害佩服!同期待你的英文版本!
艾茶
阿普一定是很喜欢这首歌,唱得非常扎实有力,我好像听到一点儿调侃!非常感谢!
杰克_JK
》鼓掌喝彩,你弹舌头的功夫不简单啊!我也学了这个美歌的刀郎版的第一段。我发在溜圆的

某论坛。因为那里刚刚的大战才结束,居然被人认为是暗喻讽刺那里的网友。要打折折叠处理,主页不显示。倒是还没有删掉。全是刀郎的原歌词,我一个字都没有改啊,真冤枉啊!

刀郎的歌放在哪里,都有挖苦讽刺不公不义的事儿效果,真像一面照妖镜的作用!

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AP33912
有几个单词还得调整一下,谢谢。
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AP33912
唱通了后更有意味些。是有一点点调侃,以为作为娱乐内涵,每人体会有所不同,也许这是也是300多亿点击的主要原因。
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还不知道刀郎加入这个的真实含义义?也许想引人注意:)这在歌唱上极少见。谢谢杰克。
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cicila
又是一版有特色的刀郎的罗刹海市!阿普唱得流畅好听,阿普弹舌头厉害:)这歌唱下来不容易,赞阿普好唱!!!
一荷
先占位
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谢谢公主听唱鼓励,这歌难度在最后一小段加速度:)周末愉快!
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周末愉快。
云破月花弄影
Wow,又一个高手!
南方蓝
阿普厉害!
攸墨尔
曲风有点像念经。针砭时弊的歌。念的感觉比唱更好听。你的是坛子里最接近原创意的。
远风
哈哈!有墨好唱!
徐宿淮
AP兄好唱,标题中奥地利转音及E翻译显得特高大上,吓得我差点没点进来。
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AP33912
谢谢听歌点赞。
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AP33912
这基本上北方调,但他发音每字只用了70%,这点倒有点像念经,中后段又拉高音这是长处,大俗的歌,学美声的是不会唱的:)
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谢谢远方风
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这歌词最高度即引入大哲学家威特根斯坦,以为高雅与低俗语言没啥区别,而人不要迷信高雅包装的话,哲学在于生活当中与他的老师罗素有不同
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谢谢南方兄弟。
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他曾说:语言对于世界的真相,在揭示的同时也进行了遮蔽。这点老邓学到了(“实践(际)是检验真理的唯一标准“:)
诺福克
好厉害,看出是真爱了!哈哈,连译文都出来了!歌里中间那个“哎呀”好有意境!赞!
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AP33912
谢谢小诺,俺花翻译时间与唱这歌差不多一样长,所以不唱个E歌版亏了好像(发不发另一回事:)
无问东西
哈哈,翻译的好!A兄有才!~歌唱的很放松,味道足足的!
鹿
鹿林
阿普这首唱得非常棒,很有特色!
小小艾
这粗犷的嗓子唱来特别有味道,翻译绝了!哈哈
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tiger2010
给AP的执着点赞!AP对这歌一定是真爱:)
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k2climb
AP兄低沉厚实嗓音,唱的特别好听!
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66的山梁
很有特色的翻唱!
风华
AP兄这翻译绝了哈哈:)唱的也很逗,念经的感觉~~:)
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谢谢楼上,风华,66,K2兄,老虎兄弟,艾帮主, 鹿林,及无班等听歌鼓励!
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xiaosai
别开生面的译本,AP厉害!
華西車城
太有味兒了