【You Raise Me Up】

移花接木
楼主 (文学城)

这首歌很好,很正能量。也很考验功力。没大错完成下来。我是顾头难顾尾,高音部分好点,低音,细节掌握不好。这个Josh Groban原唱的伴奏好象比其他版本的更难一些。过一年后再重新试试。

You Raise Me Up

Josh Groban
When I am down and, oh my soul, so weary
When troubles come and my heart burdened be
Then, I am still and wait here in the silence
Until You come and sit awhile with me.


You raise me up, so I can stand on mountains
You raise me up, to walk on stormy seas
I am strong, when I am on your shoulders
You raise me up to more than I can be

You raise me up, so I can stand on mountains
You raise me up, to walk on stormy seas
I am strong, when I am on your shoulders
You raise me up to more than I can be.

You raise me up, so I can stand on mountains
You raise me up, to walk on stormy seas
I am strong, when I am on your shoulders
You raise me up to more than I can be.

You raise me up, so I can stand on mountains
You raise me up, to walk on stormy seas
I am strong, when I am on your shoulders
You raise me up to more than I can be.
You raise me up to more than I can be.

何仙姑
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何仙姑
No improvement is needed ! Mazbutt mazbutt

Mazbutt! 

心存善念
好唱,赞!花帅音域广阔
心存善念
加个童声版

 

妖妖灵
前两句主歌的歌词表达学习了,发现这首歌大量的歌词重复啊。你唱歌进步真是非常大,不只音准,还注意了轻重节奏,最后还听到颤音,完成度
妖妖灵
很高!
移花接木
艾玛,萌了一脸狗血,还在学说话奶声奶气就学会美声唱法了
移花接木
只有两段歌词,副歌就是第二段再重复三遍,我专注澎拜高音,低音有些虚还显生硬,
移花接木
感觉这些大歌的旋律节奏都不很复杂,主要是发音挑战大。好多流行歌曲的旋律节奏就觉得挺复杂
妖妖灵
my heart burdened be是什么语法?查了一下高音到了C5,对男声很高了。你会唱颤音了?!厉害!
移花接木
好像见过这种倒装的用法,感觉是凑韵脚或强调什么的