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甜虫虫
楼主 (文学城)

Last, but definitely not the least. Yesterday, I looked through Tweeting Green's posts, and found these two beautiful poems.

【ChildhoodFantasy】《童年的家园》

【梅雨潭的爱】单程列车上的情歌

 

槐树 (The Pagoda Tree)

Written By: Tweeting Green

Recited By: Sweetbug

 

单程列车 (The One Way Train)

Written By: Tweeting Green

Recited By: Sweetbug

 

And a couple of small treats :)

 

Your Jade

   -- Sweetbug

 

Not a dazzling diamond,

Not a piece of glistening gold.

No, no, my dear, you're not,

You're a soft, warm, and pure jade

That I hold close to my heart.

 

 

Raindrops in Your Eyes

          -- Sweetbug

 

I had a dream last night.

It was raining,

The soft and warm rain

That I always like.

I enjoyed walking in the rain,

To feel the raindrops touching my skin.

 

But you, you said,

You did not like the rain.

It made you sad 

And want to cry.

Because she left you

On that rainy rainy night.

 

I kept you dry,

So the raindrops did not get

In your eyes.

 

 



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陶陶三
虫虫也是诗人,棒棒哒!:-)
盈盈一笑间
朗诵得真好,尤其是英文朗诵。
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beautifulwind
占座
L
LYJiang
读虫虫,如啖蔗,渐入佳境。听虫虫,如振玉,渐远红尘。
L
LYJiang
Simple in style, but stylish. Plain in words, but “wordsworthy.”
L
LYJiang
I can't agree with you more.
忒忒绿
虫虫加入诗人行列了,祝贺!:)
忒忒绿
+1086
L
LYJiang
Mandarin speakers can handle the r sound better than

their Cantonese counterparts.

忒忒绿
抢沙发
忒忒绿
不知不觉中就又被绑了。I’m really touched by your reciting of affectionate a
忒忒绿
by your reciting of affectionateness and warmth
忒忒绿
I like the two poems so much. They are short, and with plain and

but natural, genuine, heartfelt and touching.

天玉之
几首并赏,赞!

 

Chong Chong, did you record your recite when everyone in your house were sleeping? I feel as if you worried waking them up...your voice could be a little louder and not hushed. On the other hand, it might be the style that you prefer: someone talking next to your ear at night...

 

Just want you to know how I felt when I hear the recordings ~

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ibelieu
But you said you didn’t know how to write poems!

You cheated.  No fair!  :-)))

移花接木
感谢绑架活动,听众有福,虫虫的美声开挂啦,
甜虫虫
陶陶周末好!谢谢, 不敢啊, 我真不懂怎么写诗,只能说这是随感 :)
甜虫虫
Good afternoon Yang Yang! Thank you :)
甜虫虫
哈哈,谢谢绿绿!
甜虫虫
盈盈周末好!谢谢聆听:)
甜虫虫
You know what, I have problem with R sound too.

 Often my R sounds more like L. I have to pay close attention to get it right, or close to being right. :)

甜虫虫
谢谢美风!辛苦了!
甜虫虫
Oh My! You made my day, my weekend too. :)

This is itself a beautiful poem!

I don't know if I desever your over-the-top praise, but I'm taking it. I want to print it out and hang it up on the wall. hahaha

Thank you so much! 

Have a great weekend!

甜虫虫
awww, so nice! This is me, plain and simple.:) Thank you so much
甜虫虫
Your beautiful poems inspired me :) Thank you!
陶陶三
有一种诗叫感遇诗。虫虫这么随便一感遇,就成诗了,厉害!
甜虫虫
Thank you for liking them :) Have a great weekend!
甜虫虫
Thank you for reading my post!

Thanks for letting me know about your thoughts.

You know what, I myself was puzzled too why I was not able to read out louder. I didn't intentionally hush my voice. But that's all I was able to come out with the emotions I intended to convery. My voice changes with my emotion. I need to figure out how to improve this.

I didn't know anything about 朗诵,just like I didn't know anything about writing a poem. It's just my natural and genuine feelings I sounded them out and wrote them down. Singing is the same. I didn't take any classes or read books about singing either. I don't have much  knowledge about any of these. Just DO it! hahaha

Enjoyed reading your poems! 

Have a great weekend!

甜虫虫
haha, are those poems? I still don't know how to write poems. :)
甜虫虫
Thank you:) and have a great weekend!
甜虫虫
哈哈,谢谢花帅!还真要感谢美坛, 我以前从没有读过这么多诗:)
甜虫虫
哈哈,那就是感遇诗了,虫虫的感遇诗!谢谢陶陶鼓励!
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beautifulwind
恭喜虫虫。首页进来,谢谢网管,绑架活动 最后一绑 Lucky Number 7 推荐成功
何仙姑
Lovely!