《我》

忒忒绿
楼主 (文学城)



Me

By Tweeting Green

I haven’t seen me for a long
Time
I pulled out all drawers 
Of the cabinets 
Fumbled around 
In the closets 
And groped about 
In my pockets 
Finally, I found me among
The characters of a poem


《我》
—- 忒绿

我好久不见了
拉开所有柜子的抽屉
在壁橱里寻觅
在口袋里里摸索
终于,在一首诗的字母里
找到了我


 

 

 



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忒忒绿
周日愉快,友们!:)
i
ibelieu
A thought provoking piece. Just lovely.
盈盈一笑间
这首写得好,很有意思,耐人寻味。我再推敲一下哈。。现代人容易在忙乱中迷失自己,只能在诗歌里重新找回自我 ?
忒忒绿
Thank Ibe for reading and nice encouragement
忒忒绿
小盈盈好,谢谢你看见了里面的字母:)
甜虫虫
Congratulations! You found YOU! :)
忒忒绿
The same to you, you found the key to the lock:)
甜虫虫
Yes, I'm glad :)
i
ibelieu
Ah, you two just brought back memories of

Vice Admiral James Stockdale and how the poor chap infamously started his vice-presidential debate: "Who am I? Why am I here?"

忒忒绿
Me knocked at my door, i looked at me and asked who r u;))
忒忒绿
慢慢推敲;)
陶陶三
You are not characters of a poem; you are a poem.
忒忒绿
Thank TaoTao, I’m a letter:))
b
beautifulwind
这是诗人的自画像吗?好帅!:)
忒忒绿
谢凤儿雅临!像我吗;)
A
AP33912
letter starting K , King or Key. you can’t leave home w/o key.
忒忒绿
This is a key:))
天山晨
自我发现,这个好!画的好!
轻轻的我来
你在诗里找到了你, 我在画中发现了你.
忒忒绿
哈哈,发现自己不容易:)
忒忒绿
我在哪里;)谢谢雅临!
L
LYJiang
Self-discovery is just a poem away. Great!