欲哥用音乐用英语来翻译余光中《乡愁四韵》。
我试着用七律古诗向余光中先生致敬。这首七律借用了《乡愁四韵》一诗中,反复吟唱的的长江,海棠,雪花,家信,腊梅,乡土等诗歌意象,表达漂泊在海外的游子,那说不尽的惆怅乡愁。。
乡愁四韵 平水韵一先
旧国家园忆去年,关山万里隔烟川。
千峰云树海棠月,九曲长江风雪天。
客久惭悲腊梅落,归来难寄雁信传。
何时得偿还乡愿,且赋别情游子篇。
附:欲哥的主贴原文:
One of my favorite song.
I still remembered that I played this song on stage when I was in university.
Played it last night again.
I miss my family, I miss home.
余光中诗词,罗大佑1982年作曲
英文翻译是网上找的,我感觉过于直白,相信梅雨潭的高手们肯定翻译得更好。
给我一瓢长江水啊长江水
酒一样的长江水
醉酒的滋味
是乡愁的滋味
给我一张海棠红啊海棠红
血一样的海棠红
沸血的烧痛
是乡愁的烧痛
给我一片雪花白啊雪花白
信一样的雪花白
家信的等待
是乡愁的等待
给我一朵腊梅香啊腊梅香
母亲一样的腊梅香
母亲的芬芳
是乡土的芬芳
Give me a scoop of the Yangzi River, oh, the Yangzi
River like wine
The taste of drunkenness
Is the taste of homesickness
Give me a red hibiscus, oh, red hibiscus
Hibiscus as red as blood
The scalding pain of seething blood
Is the scalding pain of homesickness
Give me a white snowflake, oh, white snowflake
Snowflake as white as a letter
To wait for a letter from home
Is to wait feeling homesick
Give me a fragrant plum blossom, oh, plum blossom
Plum blossom as fragrant as Mother
Mother’s fragrance
Is the fragrance of my native soil
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寒锋一抹破青天,月坠花林白里妍。
狂想几时非正道?苦斟无处是甘泉。
诗囊易比钱囊满,心坎难同井坎填。
伯乐绳缰还伯乐,长风踏燕马平川。
欲哥用音乐用英语来翻译余光中《乡愁四韵》。
我试着用七律古诗向余光中先生致敬。这首七律借用了《乡愁四韵》一诗中,反复吟唱的的长江,海棠,雪花,家信,腊梅,乡土等诗歌意象,表达漂泊在海外的游子,那说不尽的惆怅乡愁。。
乡愁四韵 平水韵一先
旧国家园忆去年,关山万里隔烟川。
千峰云树海棠月,九曲长江风雪天。
客久惭悲腊梅落,归来难寄雁信传。
何时得偿还乡愿,且赋别情游子篇。
附:欲哥的主贴原文:
One of my favorite song.
I still remembered that I played this song on stage when I was in university.
Played it last night again.
I miss my family, I miss home.
余光中诗词,罗大佑1982年作曲
英文翻译是网上找的,我感觉过于直白,相信梅雨潭的高手们肯定翻译得更好。
给我一瓢长江水啊长江水
酒一样的长江水
醉酒的滋味
是乡愁的滋味
给我一瓢长江水啊长江水
给我一张海棠红啊海棠红
血一样的海棠红
沸血的烧痛
是乡愁的烧痛
给我一张海棠红啊海棠红
给我一片雪花白啊雪花白
信一样的雪花白
家信的等待
是乡愁的等待
给我一片雪花白啊雪花白
给我一朵腊梅香啊腊梅香
母亲一样的腊梅香
母亲的芬芳
是乡土的芬芳
给我一朵腊梅香啊腊梅香
Give me a scoop of the Yangzi River, oh, the Yangzi
River like wine
The taste of drunkenness
Is the taste of homesickness
Give me a scoop of the Yangzi River, oh, the Yangzi
Give me a red hibiscus, oh, red hibiscus
Hibiscus as red as blood
The scalding pain of seething blood
Is the scalding pain of homesickness
Give me a red hibiscus, oh, red hibiscus
Give me a white snowflake, oh, white snowflake
Snowflake as white as a letter
To wait for a letter from home
Is to wait feeling homesick
Give me a white snowflake, oh, white snowflake
Give me a fragrant plum blossom, oh, plum blossom
Plum blossom as fragrant as Mother
Mother’s fragrance
Is the fragrance of my native soil
Give me a fragrant plum blossom, oh, plum blossom
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寒锋一抹破青天,月坠花林白里妍。
狂想几时非正道?苦斟无处是甘泉。
诗囊易比钱囊满,心坎难同井坎填。
伯乐绳缰还伯乐,长风踏燕马平川。