【绿队】【美坛蓝绿绑架争霸】Country Road VS Walking Trail

天边一片白云
楼主 (文学城)

既聪明有淘气的陶陶三用花式手段绑架了我们的美凤班主。是可忍,孰不可忍?今天必须把他绑架起来。

大家一定记得他花言巧语,谦称自己为小麻雀唱了一首Country Road。我来一篇Walking Trail。

Walking down a trail along a river
With my dear daughter
When we started to talk about her papa
She asked how we fell in love 
"Any romanitic stories?"
My face blushed with a shy smile up
"oh dear, that was long time ago when we were in college"


We first met on a train ride going home from school for summer break
I sat together my friend on a two-person’s couch
Your daddy sat with his friend on the other seat across the folding table between us
We realized we were from same college but in different department after a few chats.
Four of us played poker and I was teamed  with your papa
The other boy brought a watermelon and shared all of us kindly
The time was flying and the train arrived at the station before we noticed.
We said good bye without even knowing each other's  name
 
We met the second time  on a road lined up with big WuTong trees on a spring day of March
I was walking alone after classes to a Cafeteria for Lunch
"Hey, LaoXiang" a voice came behind me suddenly
I turned back with a puzzled face, wondering: "Who are this guy? Is he calling me?”
"Don't you remember me?  We met on the train, playing poke" he explained eagerly
I looked at him and recollected his small but smiling eyes
 
Later, we met again and again in cafeteria-changed ballroom at the nights of weekends
Social dance was quite popular at that time in campus
I sucked at dancing, but your daddy was good at  dance
When we danced together, the melody flew into my heart
My heart beat like a drum, like a drum
When your daddy danced, he looked so charming and so cool
And he didn't mind I kept on stepping on his foot, on his foot
 
“Daughter, Do you know why your daddy wanted a  girl like you?”
 “He dreamed to dance with her daughter and hopping no stepping on this foot”
 
 
link to 陶陶三's original post: https://bbs.wenxuecity.com/mysj/233158.html

陶陶三's Country Road: Walking down a country road
With my dear Mama
When we started to talk about
My Papa
I asked how they fall in love
"Any romantic part?"
Mama's face flushed
With a shy smile up
She said Papa loved playing the flute
And "so far so good."
Often sitting in the attic with dove
Flew the melody into her heart            

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beautifulwind
沙发!
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beautifulwind
哇哇哇,谢谢陶导!把白云的初恋浪漫史翻出来啦!!缘份啊缘分!! 你没问他,是巧合还是设计的巧合?!:)
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beautifulwind
难怪那么喜欢火车,原来火车促成了这么美好的姻缘:)是不是你打扑克总赢?!:)
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beautifulwind
我好激动啊,美坛是多么好玩儿的地方,这是白云写的第一首英文诗歌词!!!:)
甜虫虫
白云真棒!好温馨的画面和回忆! :)
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beautifulwind
虫虫,明天接着绑!一天绑一个!:)
唐古
A beautiful romantic love story!
甜虫虫
一天绑一个肯定没那能力,脑子不够用啊 :)
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Ha65494
蓝:绿 = 300: 270 绿队加油啊!:)
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beautifulwind
亲爱的,辛苦啦!!!晚安,抱抱,你是主持人,不用每个帖都跟帖的:)
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Ha65494
你也辛苦了!我怕如果算错,可以跟踪在哪一个贴里算错。:)
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beautifulwind
你想得好周到,比我周到多了,今天辛苦大大的,晚安:)
移花接木
plain language masterpiece, skilful writing, slow to warm 白云, 又提

提醒我,该去录一下那首country 歌了,

我借用那首歌的曲调哼陶导的这首歌

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ibelieu
Wow! Such a charming piece! So very romantic, and yet,

not without a humorous streak.  There is no doubt this delicately crafted ballad is sending many a reader down memory lane.  Oh, come on!  Ditch that faked look of confusion now.  I'm talking about you!  If this beautiful poem does not touch some tender chords in your soul, trust me, my friend, you have not lived.  :)

 

 

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AP33912
Poker 缘,a romantic story.
天边一片白云
为了救你这个才女加美人,我拿这老命又拚了一次。这不你在AP的情节剧里逃了
天边一片白云
谢谢虫虫的一贯鼓励。我在美语潭里不怕出丑。
移花接木
sweet melody flew right thru and filled my mind
天边一片白云
移花太舍得夸奖了。我阅读少,中文写作不行。英文更是不地道。
陶陶三
天边白云,河畔漫步,列车扑克,三月梧桐,舞厅踩脚,小鹿乱撞,真是一个英文浪漫爱情史诗啊。有storis就是好。
天边一片白云
你也绑架一下陶导,帮我们绿队搬点分回来。
移花接木
啊, 别把我当闺蜜呀, 游戏规则是异性绑架啊
天边一片白云
Can’t agree you more. 相信同时代的人都会有些类似的经历。
天边一片白云
上次回国坐高铁,速度太快了,感觉没时间打扑克就到站了。
天边一片白云
你别説,你这个就是好。我其实不满意重复用了heart这个词。please free to correct more.
移花接木
heart好, 我太僵硬了,没把heart当作thinking organ
天边一片白云
Thank you 唐古 for reading and comments.
天边一片白云
这是陶导的好引导的结果。
天边一片白云
哈哈美语潭那么多诗人,我们也跟着往诗人的道路上走。
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Ha65494
浪漫美好的邂逅!写得真好!
大家一定记得他花言巧语,谦称自己为小麻雀唱了一首Country Road——很多人都忘了。然而,你还记得
天山晨
美好的回忆和诗歌!白云绑得好!把陶陶的原作一下子丰富了内容!
天边一片白云
谢谢哈梅。等着你发奖
天边一片白云
难得记性好了一次。
天边一片白云
谢谢天山。好呆可以入围颁奖典礼了。
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beautifulwind
恭喜白云。首页进来,谢谢网管,绑架活动 Country Road VS Walking Trail 推荐成功
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LYJiang
Girl power is back with a vengeance, thanks to 白云!