忙里偷闲来探班。贴完了还要回去熬夜加班。试试写一首英文歌词。

枫林晓
楼主 (文学城)

谢谢美风邀请。不是很会玩英文,就是试着用音乐的韵律带着我drift吧。

Loneliness

Sometimes I gaze in the pleasant days
When love is young and youth is free
She sweeps within her frenzied mind
Through every shape of her sweet sweet song
Sing to the wind that melts my soul
Sing to the flower that imprints my eyes
Refuse to let go to let it fade, 
Refuse to breath to refresh my days
Gone with the summer breezes my love
Across the greenfield ONLY WE KNEW
Now I am living all in my fort
Drown in the liquor drown in the song
Sang to the wind that melted my soul
Sang to the flower that imprinted my eyes

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rVkwu_67xV0&list=PLq4P6FVqQ_F_Jh20OMg3gKBDG7SiWXC2l

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beautifulwind
沙发!我差点不能相信自己的眼睛!!
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beautifulwind
热泪欢迎枫林音乐大才子! 感觉好几个世纪都没听你的音乐了, 你居然把英文歌词说写就写出来了?

歌词写得好棒,每个字都恰到好处,

前些日子又听了一遍音乐人介绍的火星哥的Leave the door open,歌词那么直白, 还是更喜欢你这种含蓄的,更值得细细品味

刚才以为渥太华时间是midnight, 一查, 已经半夜1点了, 别太为资本家卖命, 

多来美坛玩, 不然我都快忘了Jazz的味道:)

什么时候唱出来?

 

 

青松站
Simplicity&Complex-ity-what a drag-:))..longtime no see..

Still..For a Bohemian  soul-:))..

Joy is the main theme after all the rains and winds-:))..all the seasons been there,..peace comes  in..

Stay Safe-:))..

Take Care-;))..

Rain &tears ..all the same..

Used to be a veteran of the hippie  times?..the original-:))..very much a  Bohemian  song,surprised  that  got placed  to be inspirational..

Guess  that's  what people called "mellow "..

 

The Bohemian  heart, the Bohemian  lifestyle..

Rain And Tears Song by Aphrodite's Child     Overview   Lyrics   Listen   Other recordings   People also search for   Main results Rain and tears are the same
But in the sun you've got to play the game When you cry
In winter time
You can pretend
It's nothing but the rain How many times I've seen
Tears coming from your blue eyes Rain and tears, are the same
But in the sun
You've got to play the game Give me an answer, love (oh)
I need an answer, love (oh)
Rain and tears in the sun
But in your heart
You feel the rainbow waves Rain and tears
Both I shun
For in my heart there 'll never be a sun Rain and tears, are the same
But in the sun
You've got to play the game
Game Source: LyricFind Songwriters: Evangelos Papathanassiou / Gerard Bergman Rain And Tears lyrics © Sony/ATV Music Publishing LLC   Show les    
天山晨
占位-----好听!听歌词好像这歌是唱给美风,花花,和花董的,哈哈!
枫林晓
谢谢。音乐的多形态,品味的多样化,在那个时代繁茂无比。
枫林晓
昨天半夜,花了半小时,写了这首,不是很认真,也不太懂,认真不起来。内容很朴素,我只是尽量版韵律写进去,语言上肯定不咋地。
青松站
The heart & the soul..

The heart & the soul..

枫林晓
还真是!
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beautifulwind
啊?半小时就写出来?对你仰望的已经不只是作曲啦!特别喜欢“Refuse to breath to refresh my days

特别喜欢“Refuse to breath to refresh my days”那个任性的爱“一下就写出来,

情绪一来,才情挡都挡不住!等着你唱出来!

为你的处女原创英文歌词热烈鼓掌!!非常感谢在美坛美美的首发!:)

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beautifulwind
没有,枫林一直自称“风”的,他认识我的时候,我是妖灵后:)
枫林晓
我还自称疯呢。哈哈。这与自称没有关系。与他称有关系。
移花接木
太棒了, 第一首loneliness, 神似We will rock you起始鼓点我差点就喊出来we'll we'll roc

我差点就跟着喊出来了we'll we'll rock u

 

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beautifulwind
你要是玩配器,可以随便设置clapping:)
枫林晓
鼓机。pad
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beautifulwind
我还真没用过,什么时候等我弄下一首歌的时候争取用上,学习啦:)
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沿途美景
大赞英文歌词,期待你谱曲和演唱!!
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beautifulwind
恭喜枫林。首页进来,谢谢网管, 忙里偷闲来探班。贴完了还要回去熬夜加班。推荐成功
枫林晓
哈哈我就是来探班,学习英文。没写过,头一回。出歌等闲下来的。
枫林晓
谢谢美风推
盈盈一笑间
大赞英文歌词,期待你谱曲和演唱!! - 沿途美景
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beautifulwind
不但探班,还要探头,不然真lonely啦:)美景是主持人,你赶紧把你小时候弹钢琴的故事写出来!美坛有主持颁奖典礼的机会,很好玩儿