传统项目一句话翻译,没有标准答案,各位的答案已很精准。我也凑个自己的表达,求斧正!

树的花花世界
楼主 (文学城)

1. 英译汉

For many of us in our community, this is the first time we are even able to voice our fear and our anger, and I really am so grateful for everyone willing to listen。One thing that I know is that many in our community are very scared, and I understand that. And one way to go through our fear is to reach out to our community.

对于亚裔社区的大部分人来说,这是我们第一次公开表达我们的恐惧和愤慨,我衷心感激愿意聆听的每个人。有一件事很确定,恐惧情绪在社区里蔓延,我明白。而消除这种恐惧的一个方法就是向社区寻求帮助支持。

 

英译汉

 

《梦田》三毛

 

每个人心里一亩 一亩田    

there is a garden in my heart, a secret garden

每个人心里一梦 一个梦    

there is a dream in my soul, a sweet dream 

一颗啊一颗种子           

a seed, a magic seed

是我心里的一亩田         

is planted in my secret garden 

用它来种什么             

what could it grow to?

用它来种什么            

what could it grow to?

种桃种李种春风          

juicy peaches, sour plums, or spring breeze  

开尽梨花春又来          

full-blown pear flowers announce the arrival of spring 

那是我心里一亩田 一亩田   

that is the garden in my heart

那是我心里一个不醒梦

That is the dream in my soul

        

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beautifulwind
谢谢花花主持一句话翻译!大家来玩!不亲自参与不会意识到它对我们的表达能力的提高是多么有帮助!
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beautifulwind
我有点事需要先忙一下,一会儿回来写作业
移花接木
试试就试试

对我们社区的许多人,这是我们第一次能够说出我们的恐惧与愤怒,我感激每一个愿意聆听的人。我知道许多人感到害怕,我理解。克服恐惧的一个办法是寻求社区帮助。Sandra Oh 演讲于停止亚裔仇恨集会

 

dream field

an acre's field in everyone's heart 

 a dream in everyone's heart 

a grain, oh, a grain of seed

Is the one acre of field in my heart

what to plant in it?

what to plant in it?

plant peach, plant plum,plant beautifulwind

pear  flower withered it's spring again

that's the one acre of field, one acre of field inside my heart

that's the never awakened dream inside my heart

 

 

 

甜虫虫
谢谢花花!梦田是首好歌,喜欢歌词。等晚点来做作业:)
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beautifulwind
嘿嘿, 为了歌词押韵,我也是拼了:

英译汉 

For many of us in our community, this is the first time we are even able to voice our fear and our anger, and I really am so grateful for everyone willing to listen。One thing that I know is that many in our community are very scared, and I understand that. And one way to go through our fear is to reach out to our community.     

                    --Sandra Oh (speech at Stop Asian Hate Rally)

在我们社区,这是第一次我们能为我们的担惊受怕愤怒发声,非常感谢大家愿意聆听。有一件事情肯定,许多人很恐惧,我理解。有一种方法可以让我们穿越害怕,就是和我们社区联系。

 

 

2. 汉译英

 

《梦田》三毛

 

每个人心里一亩 一亩田          There is a grassland in one’s heart

每个人心里一梦 一个梦          There is a dream in  one's heart

一颗啊一颗种子                     One seed, one seed to start

是我心里的一亩田                  becoming a grassland in my heart

用它来种什么                        What to plant in the yard

用它来种什么                        What to plant in the yard

种桃种李种春风                     Plant peach plum with breeze and work hard,

开尽梨花春又来                     pear bloosms shining with morning star

那是我心里一亩田 一亩田       That is the grassland in my heart 

那是我心里一个不醒梦           That is a never wake dream in my heart

   
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beautifulwind
啊?哈哈

awaken用得真好,我在想怎么用awake,觉得不对,

没想到你这么用,学习了

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Ha65494
试试英译汉:

英译汉 

For many of us in our community, this is the first time we are even able to voice our fear and our anger, and I really am so grateful for everyone willing to listen。One thing that I know is that many in our community are very scared, and I understand that. And one way to go through our fear is to reach out to our community.     

                    --Sandra Oh (speech at Stop Asian Hate Rally)

 

我们的社会中有很多人都是第一次说出我们的恐惧和愤怒,我非常感谢所有愿意听我们的人。我知道很多人都很害怕,这个我很理解。有一点可以战胜我们的恐惧感,就是去接触我们的社会。

 

— Sandra Oh在“停止对亚洲人仇恨的集会”上的演讲

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beautifulwind
哈美女,也把歌词翻了,很好玩:)
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Ha65494
好,第一次尝试译诗,完全不押韵

2. 汉译英

 

《梦田》三毛

 

每个人心里一亩 一亩田

每个人心里一梦 一个梦

一颗啊一颗种子

是我心里的一亩田

用它来种什么

用它来种什么

种桃种李种春风

开尽梨花春又来

那是我心里一亩田 一亩田

那是我心里一个不醒梦

 

Everyone’s heart has a reserved place 

Everyone’s heart has a dream

A seed is 

The reserved place in my heart

What shall I grow there 

I’ll grow peach, apricot and spring breeze

Pear blossom brings the Spring 

That’s the reserved place in my heart

That’s my dream I’ll never wake up from

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beautifulwind
很棒!写出来最重要,押韵也不是必须的,Taylor Swift写的歌很多都不押韵
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Ha65494
谢谢妖妖鼓励!:)
天边一片白云
It is hard. Try my best. Thank you, huahua.

英译汉 

For many of us in our community, this is the first time we are even able to voice our fear and our anger, and I really am so grateful for everyone willing to listen。One thing that I know is that many in our community are very scared, and I understand that. And one way to go through our fear is to reach out to our community.     

 

在我们社区,很多人是第一次得以表达我们的恐惧和愤怒。我很感激每个人都愿意倾听。我所知道的一件事是我们社区中的很多人都很惊慌。对此,我很理解。 克服恐惧的一种办法是向社区寻求帮助。

                    

 

 

2. 汉译英

 

《梦田》三毛

 

每个人心里一亩 一亩田

每个人心里一梦 一个梦

一颗啊一颗种子

是我心里的一亩田

用它来种什么

用它来种什么

种桃种李种春风

开尽梨花春又来

那是我心里一亩田 一亩田

那是我心里一个不醒梦

 

There is an arce of field in everybody's heart

There is a dream in everybody's heart

there is a seed in the field in my heart

what to grow?

what to grow?

Peach, pear grow in spring

Flower bloom year after year

in the field in my heart

that is the dream in my heart.

 

 

 

 

 

忒忒绿
沙发,

1, 英译汉 

For many of us in our community, this is the first time we are even able to voice our fear and our anger, and I really am so grateful for everyone willing to listen。One thing that I know is that many in our community are very scared, and I understand that. And one way to go through our fear is to reach out to our community. 

我们社区里的许多人是第一次能够有机会这样说出我们的恐惧和愤怒,因此,我非常感激愿意聆听这些声音的每个人。我所知道的是社区里的人都很恐惧,我理解他们的恐惧。而战胜恐惧的一个方法就是走出来与我们整个社区团结在一起。

2. 汉译英

《梦田》三毛
 A field of dream 

每个人心里一亩 一亩田
Everyone has a field in heart, a field 

每个人心里一梦 一个梦
Everyone has a dream in heart, a dream 

一颗啊一颗种子
A seed, oh a seed

是我心里的一亩田
It’s a field in my heart 

用它来种什么
What should I plant with it

用它来种什么
What should I plant with it

种桃种李种春风
To plant peaches,plums and vernal breeze

开尽梨花春又来
The pear flowers bloom again with spring 

那是我心里一亩田 一亩田
That’s a field, a field in my heart 

那是我心里一个不醒梦

That’s a dream, an unawakened dream in my heart 

 

 

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beautifulwind
你和花董翻译得很像啊,都把

一亩田翻出来了:)

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beautifulwind
沙发搬这来了,醒是这么用啊
忒忒绿
没人坐,我就抢了;)
树的花花世界
哈哈,浑然天成
树的花花世界
美风的梦田直接可以唱了。
树的花花世界
哈美女几时录这首歌吧,感觉和你特别搭
树的花花世界
year after year 用的别致
树的花花世界
诗人出手,果然不凡。vernal breeze 一出,诗的格调出来了。
唐古
英译汉: 恐惧弥漫社区 社区共同应对
树的花花世界
精髓出来了。
盈盈一笑间
哈哈,每次你都是英译汉,而我喜欢只做汉译英。
盈盈一笑间
喜欢三毛的作品。不过这汉译英也太难了点吧。先占个位。让我想想怎么写这作业。
甜虫虫
交作业:)

英译汉 

For many of us in our community, this is the first time we are even able to voice our fear and our anger, and I really am so grateful for everyone willing to listen。One thing that I know is that many in our community are very scared, and I understand that. And one way to go through our fear is to reach out to our community.     

                    --Sandra Oh (speech at Stop Asian Hate Rally)

 

对我们好多亚洲人来说,这是我们第一次有机会说出心里的害怕和愤怒。我很感恩你们都愿意聆听我们的心声。有一点我知道的是我们中有不少人很害怕,我理解你们。你如果有这种恐惧,可以求助于社区来渡过这段恐惧时期。

2. 汉译英

 

《梦田》三毛

 

每个人心里一亩 一亩田

每个人心里一梦 一个梦

一颗啊一颗种子

是我心里的一亩田

用它来种什么

用它来种什么

种桃种李种春风

开尽梨花春又来

那是我心里一亩田 一亩田

那是我心里一个不醒梦

 

There is an acre of land in every heart, an acre of land

There is a dream in every heart, a dream

A seed, oh, a tiny seed

is an acre of land in my heart

What should I plant? 

What should I plant?

A peach tree? a plum tree? or a gentle Spring breeze?

When pear trees blooming, Spring will come again

That is an acre of land in my heart, an acre of land

That is the dream in my heart from which I never wish to wake up

 

唐古
互补
树的花花世界
对你而言, 小菜一碟
忒忒绿
谢谢花花分享三毛作品和这个歌词,真美!

  三毛原文:這是現在的夢,想一片田,不要太大,那麽方方的一畝也夠了。 想著想著,掌心中湧出滿滿的種子,而我,很想把它們全種下去,去享受那農夫看見新芽的心情。
树的花花世界
虫虫的版本朗朗上口
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beautifulwind
你说话总是言简意赅
盈盈一笑间
周五晚上还要写作业,不容易啊 :)交作业:

汉译英

《梦田》三毛

Dream Land

每个人心里一亩 一亩田  

In the heart everyone has one acre of land, one acre of land.

每个人心里一梦 一个梦

In the heart everyone has one dream, one dream.

一颗啊一颗种子

One seed, one tiny seed,

是我心里的一亩田

Is from one acre of land in my heart.

用它来种什么

What to plant with it?

用它来种什么

What to plant with it?

种桃种李种春风

Planting peaches and plums, and spring breeze,

开尽梨花春又来

The pear blossoms bloom, and spring comes again.

那是我心里一亩田 一亩田

In my heart, that is one acre of land, one acre of land.

那是我心里一个不醒梦

In my heart, that is one dream that never wakes up.

盈盈一笑间
怎么可能?我这是绞尽脑汁,揉着惺忪的睡眼来交作业。
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beautifulwind
这不是作业,这是玩游戏:)你的表达总是简洁
树的花花世界
果然一出手就是大作,好仙儿
盈盈一笑间
哪有啊,谢谢花花鼓励。:)
盈盈一笑间
哈哈,玩游戏,这么一想好像轻松点。这次我觉得有压力,是因为还有笑闹活动的作业没写呢。拖到最后,总是亚历山大。55555
盈盈一笑间
我是偷懒,挑容易的做。汉译英明显简单一些,英译汉,还得讲究汉语措辞,太麻烦。不过你倒是每次轻松应对,佩服!
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beautifulwind
下周五唐古主持一句话翻译怎么样?好久没主持了,不知道有时间吗?
甜虫虫
谢谢,修改了一下最后一句
盈盈一笑间
赞歌词押韵,的确可以直接唱了。腻害!
唐古
好的 没问题
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beautifulwind
太好了,谢谢!
b
beautifulwind
真棒,花花的secret garden用得太妙了!