Light and Shadow-14 A shrine in the wall

颤音
楼主 (文学城)

A shrine in the wall

 

A shrine in a wall

silent and worn

ignored by a nomad

He leans against the wall

and dozes at dusk

But the tender sunlight

pulled and slanted by the shrine

shines on the shrine and his face

 

GPT

In this brief poem, the poet presents a scene where a shrine embedded in a wall holds significance, despite being unnoticed by a passing traveler. The imagery and juxtaposition of elements create a contemplative atmosphere.

The poem begins by describing the shrine as "silent and worn," implying a sense of age and history. It stands as a symbol of reverence or worship, nestled within the confines of a wall. The shrine's placement within the wall may indicate a hidden or forgotten aspect of spirituality or devotion.

The poet introduces a nomad who, in contrast to the stationary shrine, is constantly on the move. The nomad, seemingly preoccupied or disinterested, leans against the wall and dozes as dusk approaches. This image evokes a sense of transience, impermanence, and the weariness that can come from a nomadic lifestyle.

However, a significant shift occurs as the poem progresses. The phrase "But the tender sunlight" introduces a contrasting element. The sunlight, described as tender, suggests a soft and gentle quality. It takes on an active role, as it interacts with both the shrine and the nomad.

The sunlight is "pulled and slanted by the shrine," indicating that the shrine's presence and energy affect the path and angle of the sunlight. This interaction hints at the shrine's power or influence, even in its neglected state. The shrine acts as a catalyst, transforming the sunlight and drawing attention to itself.

As a result, the transformed sunlight shines on both the shrine and the nomad's face. This moment of illumination suggests a connection or intersection between the shrine's spiritual essence and the nomad's physical existence. It highlights the potential for transcendence or enlightenment, even amidst the mundane or overlooked aspects of life.

Overall, the poem explores themes of spirituality, transience, and the power of the unnoticed or overlooked. It invites reflection on the significance of the unseen or forgotten aspects of our surroundings and the potential for unexpected moments of illumination or connection.

 
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沙发赞!祝颤音兄周末愉快!
颤音
谢谢平胸:-)
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lovecat08
加油
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lovecat08
继续努力
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renqiulan
You have impressed me as an imagist poet.
r
renqiulan
You remind me of E. Pound & his '"In a Station of the Metro"
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renqiulan
He'll get there. He's getting there.
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shuier
Haha! Are you sure?
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renqiulan
To dissent is to respect. Thank you!
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shuier
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renqiulan
No way will you take my word without a shadow of a doubt.
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shuier
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颤音
谢谢加油↖(^ω^)↗
颤音
you're more confident than i
颤音
Thanks! Trying as a disciple of show, don't tell
颤音
Flattered and humbled
颤音
A wise response
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And God said, let there be light, and there was light

And there is 颤音 who praises light