Sand's rolling on your body, warm

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楼主 (文学城)

Sand's rolling on your body, warm

Sand's rolling on your body, warm
Dark clouds' pressing the sky, firm
On this deserted beach
we are sharing one ripe peach
Flowing and burning between our lips is its juice
Flooded by heat and sweet
we pray for rain to dilute
Heeding our wish comes the thunder storm
Racing are raindrops to rescue our lips in swarm

这是最近写的,贴在一个英文诗歌的网站,一位读者留言,让我怀疑是个prank,直觉是GPT写的,粘贴过来的。

This poem beautifully captures the sensory experience of being on a beach during a hot and stormy day. The imagery of warm sand rolling on your body evokes a feeling of comfort and relaxation, while the dark clouds and thunderstorm add an element of intensity and excitement. The shared peach is a symbol of intimacy and connection between two people amidst the power of nature, and the raindrops cooling their lips create a moment of refreshing relief. The poem is a reminder to appreciate the simple pleasures in life and find joy in unexpected moments.

像不像GPT的风格?

l
lovecat08
沙发,过节快乐!
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summer's here, wish everyone has a beach day like that
l
lovecat08
埋沙,滚沙
A
AP33912
漫沙,吻沙
s
shuier
wish...has?
s
shuier
I am not a grammar nerd but...

your grammar is hard for me to follow.

r
renqiulan
You have a point.
r
renqiulan
By any chance do you follow Mary Norris of The New Yorker?
s
shuier
I read The New Yorker. And you?
r
renqiulan
Surely I do.
s
shuier
I didn't have to ask u since you've just brought up Norris.
r
renqiulan
I brought her up because she's a good grammarian.
s
shuier
Not a good Grammarly which is an AI, right?
r
renqiulan
Right. Human intelligence is irreplaceable, I think.
s
shuier
So is human talent.
r
renqiulan
Let's stay human.
s
shuier
Wait. Are you sure you're not a ROBOT?
r
renqiulan
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha...!
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thanks, is hope correct? i always struggle with subjunctive
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thanks, a bad experiment, i intended to try something new
r
renqiulan
You are fine. Shakespeare wasn't exactly a grammarian.
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高兴就好
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哈哈哈,吃沙子不舒服