阅读同一副画

影云
楼主 (文学城)

画: 立

 

用立兄的这一副画来作为诗歌的灵感来源。这一幅画充满了具有喻意的元素,诗意无缝而又超现实地结合在一起。一幅画就是一个人内心世界的风景,浓缩着个人对生命的思考与感受。画中,遥远的海岸线,无所依托的帽子,也是有着一扇门的屋子,自它的窗口(又如同眼睛)伸出一支在凋零与另一支将绽放的玫瑰,在这没有开始与结束的空间里,猩红流溢的色彩与暗色相互照应,有着抑郁与悲壮的美。生命死亡伤口挣扎绽放,永恒的主题。我想起了王尔德的长诗,雷丁监狱的歌谣。

十位来自不同国籍的诗人对这幅画从不同的角度写的诗歌,非常有意思。

选了三首来分享。

Shogun moon   why splatter blood
running away from your body

a sword is a sickle
menacing glean

water sold in a petrol station
five bucks a bottle

half the price from the petrol
you're pumping.....

never gonna fill ya

but when it's
spurting out of your neck

think roses
how they die off

in winter

the bonsai master, snip snip snips you away
and as a butterfly battles out of it's own coffin

you'll come back

but did the world come with you

or are you skating alone
blood streaking your name
across ice   Wilted Flowers   Crimson blood seeps through
the crevices of a broken home
as the flowers living within
begin to wilt losing their petals
in an outward cry for help
from a venomous poison
that corrupted the dehydrated soils.   An evening walk   Where can I walk,
where can I look,
to find again the snows so pure,
then bury I can
these poems i wrote
and clear the ground once more,
for new poems to come to be.

For as I walked,
along the seashore today,
a rose I found lying,
dying
on the side walk,
I loved its petals
dappled with flakes of snow,
and I held it close to my heart,
and I knew without a doubt,
by the light of the reddened moon
and gently held in the arms of the dawn,
it will transform
into a poem
of beauty,
and that will happen
all in the "blink of an eye".
all in the "blink of an eye"
and it will last for eons.    

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lovecat08
早安,书香。
梧桐之丘
影云的评注很美,极富诗意。谢分享。
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lovecat08
配立图,彩!
影云
谢谢猫猫。午安即将。:)
影云
谢谢梧桐的美言。
影云
应该说是立兄的作品激发的灵感。我用这张作品作为诗歌比赛的启发。
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lovecat08
你认识立?
影云
你不认识?他发了这么多帖子。你还篇篇留言了。:)
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cicila
赞影云精彩的画评!立的画很独特。
老生常谈12
被立大师才华折服的美丽的影云
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lovecat08
我是说,真人認识,非网上。
影云
我相信有不少眼睛在黑暗中或日光里闪烁,期待着答案。

我就卖关子吧。我对现代作品的解读的兴趣远比传统作品来的多,无论是文字还是艺术。

影云
谢谢你。的确,不少参与过艺术创作的人都有此感。
影云
谢谢老生的美言。
把酒话桑麻21
深奥! 慢慢品味。。