Twin chimneys 留言出乎意料

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Twin chimneys


Twin chimneys spike into the night sky
Rises from them
not smoke
but truth
burnt by the environmental doctrines


© 6 hours ago


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Likes: Orense, Dragos G

Dragos G - Damn this poem is brutal, the last line hit like a gut punch, haven't gotten such a powerful reaction from a poem as to physically move me in a long while

Great poem



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nearby
尘凡无忧
哈,这留言是挺出乎意料的。。。:)
影云
你这首写的很好。结尾有惊讶。而且耐人寻味可多重理解。
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ling_yin_shi
我知道我知道,是teenager。哈哈,我闪先,别打人。
西
西东人8
您找Dragos G聊聊:)
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LittleEasy
Less is more
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谢谢邻兄
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是个teenager,激情满出来了,哈哈哈
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谢谢影云
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哈哈哈,你也像我,到处乱逛
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有代沟,哈哈哈
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谢谢 easy
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CBA7
A very nice and sharp piece!
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kirn
原来你是这个烟囱,他是那个。圣诞老人来你家的时候,爬哪个??