One roll of Forever Stamps

颤音
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One roll of Forever Stamps


One roll of Forever Stamps
One pile of blank envelopes
One ream of pale-yellow paper
One dried-up fountain pen
lying on a dusty desk
and waiting
in the ebbing sunlight
in an abandoned room
where a moth flies


© 3 days ago

 
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Likes: Oxymore, Jørgensen

Oxymore - I love this, youve got quite a handle on the aspect of brevity in your work, which is always a good thing!

Keep writing

尘凡无忧
赞,我也觉得颤音用词简洁,擅长描述,而且心思细微极了。。。:)
n
nearby
早赞
l
ling_yin_shi
没有shadow,多了moth。不颤也赞。:)把sunlight也去掉,加上fire,

最后,把letter烧掉。哈哈。赞我自己的脑洞。

尘凡无忧
嘘,别吵。。。别打扰人家颤音静静地深情着。。。:)
l
ling_yin_shi
忧君辛苦了,一大早跟孵蛋似的照顾各位。:)

得找个人敲敲背捏捏脚什么的。

尘凡无忧
噗。。。可以换个比喻事物吗?:)
n
nearby
好!要我写的话,最后一句会写成

Where a dead moth flying :-)

尘凡无忧
LOL
n
nearby
求表扬
尘凡无忧
奖励dead moth 一枚。。。。。:)
七斓
好像知道你为什么喜欢写诗了

因为新奥尔良对你的影响。:-)

l
ling_yin_shi
表扬+1。赞花心女。
颤音
谢谢!我偏好简洁
颤音
moth 是被 Virginia Woolf 写的 moth 影响了
颤音
谢谢!好主意 :-)
颤音
可能啊,哈哈哈