A shrine in a wall silent and worn ignored by a nomad who leans on the wall and dozes at dusk But the dying sunlight pulled and slanted by the shrine shines on the shrine and his face
Iffat Yasmin - Good write painting a mysterious picture, had to imagine the scene to enjoy the write the last 2 lines bring the whole picture to life making it meaningful
Slanted light on a shrine in the wall
A shrine in a wall
silent and worn
ignored by a nomad
who leans on the wall and dozes at dusk
But the dying sunlight
pulled and slanted by the shrine
shines on the shrine and his face
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Iffat Yasmin - Good write painting a mysterious picture, had to imagine the scene to enjoy the write the last 2 lines bring the whole picture to life making it meaningful
Clever piece