【像鹅一样唱歌】
文/天朝玉
秋天的早晨,52度,晴天。
你落入我的视线
像一片叶子,躺在路边
身体已冷, 眼睛
仍然仰望着蓝天
你的灵魂正在追赶它们吗?
在地球的重力下
美好的事物随时都有可能殒落
即使像你这样的生灵
有着天使般的羽毛和翅膀
飞行使你高于一切,却仍然摆脱不了
不定与巧合的束缚
突然吹来的一股旋风
便有可能改变命运的历程
我想以我微弱的声音和有限的手段
为你举行一个隆重的葬礼 —
当人们读到我的这首诗
他们会在跑步者的道路上停下来
深吸一口气,然后
像鹅一样,开始唱歌
【Sing Like a Goose】
By Jade
Autumn morning,52 degrees, sunny.
you fell into my sight
like a leaf, on the side of the road
your body is cold, eyes still
looking up to the blue sky
is your soul chasing after them?
Under the gravity of the earth
beauty may fall at any moment,
even for creatures like you
with wings and angel like feathers
high above everything, still
not free from uncertainty and coincidence
a sudden swirl of wind, could change
the course of fate
I will make a grand funeral for you,
with my tiny voice and limited means —
when people read my words
they will pause on their runners‘ road
take a deep breath, and
start to sing, like a goose
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我哼了前两句, match 90% 以上. 如果允许, 我填完后先请您过目, 同意, 我再试试去唱.
或许会有较大的改动, 包括文字,以及结构, 但我喜欢你的意境, 我尽量全部保留
https://bbs.wenxuecity.com/joke/1068232.html
您听听这个英文版, 然后把你的诗套进去试试, 我认为你的诗内容更丰富, 比原英文词的车轱辘话好多了,
这首英文歌美在, 刀郎的音乐以及歌手的美声
这首歌我还不会唱, 我得先学会唱, 理解曲调之后, 再慢慢填词
哈哈哈
爪哥应该同病相怜才是啊
:)))
真心话
谢谢诗意留言,问好!节日快乐!
Standing on the autumn grass i hear leaves singing
i hear policemen singing when they're chasing a speeder
i hear seafarers singing while they're spreading their sails
and yet I will never hear the Canada goose sing again
Then
i hear a learned professor singing the goose's praises...
thank you
【像鹅一样唱歌】
文/天朝玉
秋天的早晨,52度,晴天。
你落入我的视线
像一片叶子,躺在路边
身体已冷, 眼睛
仍然仰望着蓝天
你的灵魂正在追赶它们吗?
在地球的重力下
美好的事物随时都有可能殒落
即使像你这样的生灵
有着天使般的羽毛和翅膀
飞行使你高于一切,却仍然摆脱不了
不定与巧合的束缚
突然吹来的一股旋风
便有可能改变命运的历程
我想以我微弱的声音和有限的手段
为你举行一个隆重的葬礼 —
当人们读到我的这首诗
他们会在跑步者的道路上停下来
深吸一口气,然后
像鹅一样,开始唱歌
【Sing Like a Goose】
By Jade
Autumn morning,52 degrees, sunny.
you fell into my sight
like a leaf, on the side of the road
your body is cold, eyes still
looking up to the blue sky
is your soul chasing after them?
Under the gravity of the earth
beauty may fall at any moment,
even for creatures like you
with wings and angel like feathers
high above everything, still
not free from uncertainty and coincidence
a sudden swirl of wind, could change
the course of fate
I will make a grand funeral for you,
with my tiny voice and limited means —
when people read my words
they will pause on their runners‘ road
take a deep breath, and
start to sing, like a goose
更多我的博客文章>>>
我哼了前两句, match 90% 以上. 如果允许, 我填完后先请您过目, 同意, 我再试试去唱.
或许会有较大的改动, 包括文字,以及结构, 但我喜欢你的意境, 我尽量全部保留
https://bbs.wenxuecity.com/joke/1068232.html
您听听这个英文版, 然后把你的诗套进去试试, 我认为你的诗内容更丰富, 比原英文词的车轱辘话好多了,
这首英文歌美在, 刀郎的音乐以及歌手的美声
这首歌我还不会唱, 我得先学会唱, 理解曲调之后, 再慢慢填词
哈哈哈
爪哥应该同病相怜才是啊
:)))
真心话
谢谢诗意留言,问好!节日快乐!
Standing on the autumn grass i hear leaves singing
i hear policemen singing when they're chasing a speeder
i hear seafarers singing while they're spreading their sails
and yet I will never hear the Canada goose sing again
Then
i hear a learned professor singing the goose's praises...
thank you