接龙 Haiku Exercises:Harmony in Nature

康赛欧
我是现学现卖,尝试着写了一首。
妖妖灵
Nice!Rhyming well!
康赛欧
谢谢!
盈盈一笑间
My heart blooms along ~ ~
康赛欧
谢谢鼓励!
妖妖灵
发现写Haiku对注意诗的音节很有帮助 5/7/5
盈盈一笑间
在英文诗里,诗的字节怎么划分呢?
妖妖灵
就是按照每句有几个音节吧,英文诗的要求不知道~英文haiku一般也可以5/7/5,但不严格,我也不太确定:

https://spice.fsi.stanford.edu/docs/the_history_and_artistry_of_haiku

“In Japanese, a haiku poem is usually divided into three groups/lines of syllables, the first and last with five syllables, the second with seven. However, be careful not to get stymied by strict adherence to the number of syllables and miss the essence of haiku. The 17 syllables is not an absolute rule. Most Japanese syllables are short, as in po-ta-to. English syllables can be long, and take up too much space in a haiku, so English haiku frequently have fewer than 17 syllables, sometimes as few as ten.”

盈盈一笑间
喔,明白了,是根据英文单词的音节。这个知识点我都快忘了。汗。刚刚查了一下。发楼上了。
康赛欧
是的,音节5,7,5
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godog
有生活气息,不错。
C
CBA7
"My heart blooms along", Great! 谢谢康康分享。sing or singing?
暖冬cool夏
+100086,blooms along好!应该是singing?
康赛欧
谢谢暖冬鼓励!应该是singing, 我改了过来。
康赛欧
谢谢小C,我已经改了过来,应该是singing.
康赛欧
谢谢鼓励!