Pure Heart, Never Pretentious. 玉壶装不了清高

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godog
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【七律】玉壶装不了清高

 

玉壶装不了清高,雪化冰心也未消。

白发红梅争雪色,苍浪碧水逐江潮。

梦中爱意真惆怅,寒处诗情最寂寥。

笔落歌成随雁阵,行行字字上青霄。

 

Pure Heart, Never Pretentious

 

A pure heart can be seen through the chest

that is like a transparent pot, never pretentious.

 

Outside, snow melts away.

Inside, the heart, clear as ice, will stay.

 

The white-haired, the red-flowered,

all are as innocent as the snow.

 

The white waves, the green waves,

chase each other, make the tide.

 

A longing for love in the dreams

yields real melancholy.

 

A passion for poetry on the heights

is the most lonely.

 

I pen down this poem hastily,

give the lines to a wild geese formation.

 

Line by line, word by word,

they shoot up into the blue sky.

 

 

此诗是读了诗坛数位诗友同韵唱和的佳作后获得灵感而写。诗友们的佳作在下面的链接里。

https://bbs.wenxuecity.com/poetry/923512.html

 

(© January 31, 2024, godog)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

盈盈一笑间
笔落歌成随雁阵,行行字字上青霄。尾联漂亮!
盈盈一笑间
A passion for poetry on the heights is the most lonely.
方外居士
G-兄英文望尘莫及。赞!
妖妖灵
A poem dream of pretty picturesque with different strokes
盈盈一笑间
This comment is spot on. :)
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moonlight7
赞 寒处诗情最寂寥!
妖妖灵
果酱:)我都不确定是不是有语法错误:)
g
godog
谢谢盈盈摘句鼓励
g
godog
方外兄过誉了,谢谢谬赞
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godog
Your expression is poetic so no need to worry grammar:)
g
godog
谢谢鼓励!
康赛欧
学习了!
暖冬cool夏
+100086,Go兄的中文古诗词更是让人望尘莫及。赞!