After Kitty Ate Doggy's Brain

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CBA7
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After Kitten Ate Doggy's Brain
by CBA7

After kitten ate doggy's brain,
doggy said in kitten's dream:
“There is no such thing!”

P.S. My little poem was inspired by the poem below.


My Doggy Ate My Essay
by Darren Sardelli

My doggy ate my essay.
He picked up all my mail.
He cleaned my dirty closet
and dusted with his tail.
 
He straightened out my posters
and swept my wooden floor.
My parents almost fainted
when he fixed my bedroom door.
 
I did not try to stop him.
He made my windows shine.
My room looked like a palace,
and my dresser smelled like pine.
 
He fluffed up every pillow.
He folded all my clothes.
He even cleaned my fish tank
with a toothbrush and a hose.
 
I thought it was amazing
to see him use a broom.
I'm glad he ate my essay
on “How to Clean My Room.”

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移花接木
Does the cat start barking?
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CBA7
No such thing, so no barking! 哈哈哈!
盈盈一笑间
噗~~haha
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CBA7
Hahaha, 盈盈,you got it! I'm glad it makes you laugh :)
永远老李
我知道烫火锅的菜里有猪。脑花
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CBA7
哈哈哈,谢谢老李分享!
颤音
hhhh, as humorous as the original
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CBA7
颤音好,thank you for reading and commenting!
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godog
哈哈,这只狗是在自嘲地说,“我没脑子。”:))
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CBA7
哈哈,my point is,小狗告诉小猫:“Kitten Ate Doggy's Brain" 这件事情不存在!
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godog
Your poem is unleashed now.People can interpret it any way:)
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CBA7
Yes, you're right! Thank you for sharing your feedback!
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CBA7
喜欢Go兄的这个解读,有创意!
甜虫虫
Very clever! Enjoyed reading it :)
暖冬cool夏
Very imaginative:)
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renqiulan
Haha! That's quite a brain teaser, poetically speaking.
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renqiulan
BTW,isn't it raining cats & dogs in your neck of the woods?
妖妖灵
Was the kitten a tiger cub?
蓝灵
It is a new kind of brain drain.
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CBA7
Thank you, 虫虫!
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CBA7
谢谢冬夏点评鼓励。
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CBA7
Hahaha, maybe :) 谢谢秋兰!
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CBA7
Hahaha, I have no idea. As you wish :)
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CBA7
Hahaha, good point!
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CBA7
我在最后一句之前增加了一句,这样就更容易理解了。
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CBA7
是Go兄的解读提醒了我,谢谢!