Frederick Seidel's Snow

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CBA7
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Frederick Seidel's Snow
by CBA7

I read it and melt it and drink it.
It stays in my blood.
It beats in my heart.
It floods my mind and never goes.

P.S. My poem is inspired by reading the poem below.


Snow 
by Frederick Seidel

Snow is what it does.
It falls and it stays and it goes.
It melts and it is here somewhere.
We all will get there.

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妖妖灵
这个诗人的snow融化在血液里,凝结在每个细胞上了:)其实我也在扩充我的snow,看能不能变成歌词~
移花接木
Beware hypothermia,
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renqiulan
Good morning, everyone! Imagism is all the rage these days.
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renqiulan
No one would or could let snow go. Snow, please stay.
盈盈一笑间
Good morning 秋兰!Happy Friday!
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renqiulan
Kudos to 小西 !
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renqiulan
Happy Friday! Have a great weekend, 盈盈 !
盈盈一笑间
You sounds like Olaf, don’t you? haha
盈盈一笑间
It floods my mind and never goes. Awesome!!
盈盈一笑间
期待。:)
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renqiulan
Poets always have faith in snow even when it melts.
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renqiulan
BTW, snow never melts in poets' dreams, I guess.
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renqiulan
When snow melts into a running river,let's go with the flow.
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renqiulan
The fate of snow is in the hands of poets. Good heavens!
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renqiulan
Poetry is a river's journey, in my humble opinion.
盈盈一笑间
Poetic expression!It makes me think of a song “the river “

 

盈盈一笑间
雪的命运。我又想起Frederick Seidel的原诗snow 了。
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godog
Creative idea and nice poem!
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CBA7
Frederick Seidel的《雪》令我回味无穷,他的这首诗就像融化了的雪一样,融入了我的身心,在脑海中挥之不去。
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CBA7
我的这首小诗是灵感一现的时候以诗的形式写的一篇《雪》的读后感,
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CBA7
我诗中的 “it" 有点一语双关的味道,既指Frederick的这首《雪》诗,也指他诗中所写的大自然中的雪。
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CBA7
我刚才把我的这首英文小诗的中文版也加到主帖里了。
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CBA7
我刚才把我的这首英文小诗的中文版也加到主帖里了。
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CBA7
同期待!
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CBA7
谢谢灵灵点评和分享。
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CBA7
Hahaha, Frederick Seidel的《雪》诗化成雪水后,喝了它,全身发热 ,灵感一现,就写了这首英文小诗。
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CBA7
Good morning, 秋兰!谢谢你的美言和鼓励,我只是跟着自己的感觉走而已,我不跟风 :)
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CBA7
That's so ture!
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CBA7
Yes! Poetry is free like a river, led by our imagination.
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CBA7
Thank you!
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CBA7
盈盈,you're Awesome, you read my mind, that's the punch line!
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CBA7
So true and deep! Thank you for sharing your great thought.
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CBA7
Yes, you got it! My "goes" is "goes away".
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CBA7
Thank you for your nice comment and encouragement.
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CBA7
刚才把中文版也加上了,详见主帖。
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CBA7
Go兄,我刚才把中文版加上了,就更容易理解了。
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CBA7
Thank you for your nice comment and encouragement.
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CBA7
盈盈周末愉快!
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renqiulan
Call me Olaf. I'm melting,by the way, because you're a warm,
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renqiulan
friendly and inspiring moderator. MYSJ lets us enjoy the
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renqiulan
comforts of hearth and home away from our hearths and homes.
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renqiulan
小西, I need more of your snow. I'm melting really fast.
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renqiulan
You'll blaze a trail every time you have a bright idea.
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renqiulan
Keep the light on.
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CBA7
Hahaha, Olaf is a whitle spirit, blue spirit can help! :)
蓝灵
Snowflakes have found their home in your poem.
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CBA7
太过奖了,谢谢秋兰的鼓励。
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CBA7
Thank you for your beautiful words, blue spirit!