《It's Snowing 正在下雪》

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CBA7
楼主 (文学峸)

《It's Snowing》

It's snowing
without their knowing.
They're still sleeping
early in the morning,
enjoying
their warm time with snow white,
quiet
like the light snow outside.

《正在下雪》

正在下雪
他们不知情。
他们还在睡觉,
在清晨里
享受着
他们和白雪公主在一起的温暖时分,
安静得
像外面的小雪一样。

P.S. 昨天先写的英文版,由于忙着昨天的美坛活动【Poem Reading Tuesday】Snow by Frederick Seidel,没有来得及分享给大家,今天把中文版加上后一并分享。再次感谢大家对美坛活动的关注和支持。

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暖冬cool夏
太棒了!小西的诗轻轻松松、自然地把生活中的点滴写得诗意盎然!最后quiet like the light snow是点睛
甜虫虫
This piece gives readers cozy and peaceful feelings! 很棒!
天玉之
A pretty poem! Good artistic mood, sounds musical too! 赞!谢谢邀

 

请,交作业啦!:)

 

好活动!

移花接木
and who are they?
妖妖灵
Snow is so romantic that it brings tons of inspiratios~

Wonderful pick!

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CBA7
谢谢冬夏点评鼓励。是的,我没有直接写雪景,而是通过室内来写室外,还写了他们梦中的白雪公主 :)
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CBA7
Thank you, 虫虫!
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CBA7
所以是从室内到梦内,再到室外,里外三层啊,我自认为,这是这首小诗的构思独特之处,哈哈哈,都是自己人,就不谦虚了 :)
移花接木
last night's storm brought tons of dump
C
CBA7
Thank you for your nice comment! 谢谢玉之对美坛活动的大力支持!
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CBA7
That's the room for your imagination.
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CBA7
They could be children, dogs, or your lovely cats :)
盈盈一笑间
诗中有童真!棒!
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CBA7
That's ture! 谢谢灵灵对昨天美坛赏诗活动的肯定和支持!
移花接木
回头见,我先去面壁去了,the 7 dwarfs came into my mind
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CBA7
谢谢盈盈的鼓励。也可能是狗真,猫真,或者老顽童真 :) "They" 给读者留下了想象的空间。
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CBA7
哈哈哈,移哥有灵感了!
妖妖灵
Didn't u make dumplings?:)Blizzard?你昨天照相时也正在下雪吗?
移花接木
是的
天边一片白云
让人体会到幸福,温暖的小诗。羡慕睡眠好的人,早早醒来的飘过。
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renqiulan
Like fluffy white catkins drifting on a June day,
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renqiulan
snowflakes must be dreaming of summer. A silly thought. Haha
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renqiulan
A muse is always with 小西 and vice versa. Goodnight!
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CBA7
Great imagination, so poetic! Thank you for sharing.
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CBA7
Thank you for your kind words, 秋兰!Goodnight.
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CBA7
谢谢白云雅临点评鼓励。
移花接木
如果出现了,肯定是有重大冤情
盈盈一笑间
snowman must be dreaming of summer. please see enclosed

 

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CBA7
哈哈哈,不是六月飞雪,只是雪花梦见夏天而已。Just a dream, nothing happened :)
万湖小舟
欣赏了,写下了雪来去无声,却给孩子们带来欢乐。
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CBA7
谢谢小舟点评鼓励。*they"不一定就是孩子们哟,哈哈哈。