Metaverse of Mysteries

遍野
楼主 (文学峸)

Metaverse of Mysteries

Behind each door, a world unseen,
A realm of mystery, realms between.
Once entered and closed it, wonders began to shift,
In a labyrinth of enigmas, souls adrift.

Thousands of doors, infinite they may,
Familiar and curious, in their display.
Old or new, each a lure and a call,
In our metaverse, mysteries enthrall.

On shelves they stand, a spectral array,
Inviting spirit of wisdom with our stay. 
Wondering which door where we lost?
Swimming through secrets, we will find the way.

Yet, amidst the metaverse, at least one door I knew,
A flash to where your essence once flew.
At random, yet guided by fate, 
I opened it, not a moment too late :+) ~~~~~ 

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和朋友逛旧书店随感练笔!~~~~ 

 

 

甜虫虫
Very well-written with thoughtfully conceived ideas!
甜虫虫
Every book is like a door to the unknown, old or new
甜虫虫
A twist in the last stanza, like it :)
甜虫虫
Somehow, this poem reminds me of an audio book I recently

finished: "Midnight Library". :)

遍野
谢谢您喜欢!started from the idea of a palace, but
遍野
But it is too concrete, so think of ‘metaverse of mysteries’
遍野
Then a book as a door to unknown mysteries,
遍野
The bookstore is a local house, very unique/antique style
盈盈一笑间
A flash to where your essence once flew.
盈盈一笑间
The poem is enchanting.Full of imagery that captivates soul

遍野
If drawing a dragon, that should be the eyes. glad you

glad you like it. I like it 2 :+)~~~~~

遍野
谢谢盈盈!希望如您所说。刚刚学写,还在找感觉。。。请多赐教!!~~~~
甜虫虫
Thanks for sharing your thought process!
甜虫虫
We like to visit old bookstores too.
甜虫虫
Every city we went, we checked out some old bookstores :)
甜虫虫
The dragon eye :)
方外居士
There areMany possibilities before realized in only one way.
遍野
:+))
遍野
Absolutely!~~~~
颤音
beautiful, taste like sonnets
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godog
Intriguing! If you just started, you're already skillful!
妖妖灵
Excellent rhyming~
遍野
呵呵,谢谢颤音鼓励!sonnets多了两行:)~~~~~
遍野
谢谢G 诗友!英文诗刚开始学写。不过中文诗词新诗都写了好多年了。其实都一样,需要的是感觉一下英文的各种用法和表达
遍野
谢谢您来读!祝冬安!~~~