【七律】跨年印象
旧岁凋零如焰火，新年绽放似烟花。
明明灭灭千星闪，艳艳纤纤万点斜。
坎坷春秋来有意，平凡岁月去无涯。
青天漫夜华灯在，春梦刚成见曙霞。
Impression, New Year's Eve
The old year withers like fireworks.
The new year blooms like fireworks.
They shine and dim like thousands of stars,
leaving brilliant and elegant traces.
The ups and downs of life come with
purpose, ordinary, but infinite.
The blue sky of the night is mistaken
the holiday lights with its own stars.
My dream of the spring are brightened
and then awakened by the morning glow.
(© January 1, 2024, godog)
and then awakened by the morning glow afar
为了更押韵，加了一个afar可不可以？
【七律】跨年印象
旧岁凋零如焰火，新年绽放似烟花。
明明灭灭千星闪，艳艳纤纤万点斜。
坎坷春秋来有意，平凡岁月去无涯。
青天漫夜华灯在，春梦刚成见曙霞。
Impression, New Year's Eve
The old year withers like fireworks.
The new year blooms like fireworks.
They shine and dim like thousands of stars,
leaving brilliant and elegant traces.
The ups and downs of life come with
purpose, ordinary, but infinite.
The blue sky of the night is mistaken
the holiday lights with its own stars.
My dream of the spring are brightened
and then awakened by the morning glow.
(© January 1, 2024, godog)
and then awakened by the morning glow afar
为了更押韵，加了一个afar可不可以？