《The Peach Blossom Written in My Poetry》《写在诗里的桃花》

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CBA7
楼主 (文学峸)

The Peach Blossom Written in My Poetry

if there is only one peach blossom in spring
you are the second one
I see it in my eyes

if there are only two peach blossoms in spring
you are the third one
I hold it in my hand

if there are only three peach blossoms in spring
you are the fourth one
I wear it on my head

if there are only four peach blossoms in spring
you are the fifth one
I hold it in my mouth

if there are only five peach blossoms in spring
you are the sixth one
I hide it in my heart

if there are only six peach blossoms in spring
you are the seventh one
I write it in my poetry

if there are no peach blossoms in spring
I still have my peach blossom
spring doesn't have to have peach blossoms

Comments from Allpoetry:
pandorapoet22 - How refreshingly beautiful and endearing it is to read such a warmhearted and innocent poem. Very well done and thank you so much for sharing this gorgeous gem. May your peach blossoms be many, my friend and may you carry them deep within your heart in whatever you do and wherever you may go.

Garbage bin - I really like the way this piece progresses through each tercet. Each stanza bringing a stronger sense of adoration. Inspired

写在诗里的桃花

假如春天只有一朵桃花
你就是第二朵
看在眼里

假如春天只有两朵桃花
你就是第三朵
捧在手里

假如春天只有三朵桃花
你就是第四朵
戴在头上

假如春天只有四朵桃花
你就是第五朵
含在口里

假如春天只有五朵桃花
你就是第六朵
藏在心里

假如春天只有六朵桃花
你就是第七朵
写在诗里

假如春天没有桃花
我还是有桃花
春天不必有桃花


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妖妖灵
Nice poem smells fragrant like peach blossoms!
C
CBA7
Thank you for your lovely comment.
妖妖灵
C
CBA7
What's your point? 有两首歌的歌名里都是用的 eyes, not eye,见里面的链接:

《See You Through My Eyes》

The Head and the Heart - See You Through My Eyes (Official Music Video) - YouTube


《I Can See It In Your Eyes》

Men At Work - I Can See It In Your Eyes (Live) - YouTube

 

妖妖灵
就是想知道eyes到底用不用复数?看来在成语里不用,一般说话时用吧
移花接木
a picture worth a thousand words, how about two?

C
CBA7
Then, poets are no longer needed? 哈哈哈,和移哥开个玩笑。有时候,文字的魅力无法替代。
C
CBA7
谢谢移哥分享美图!有美图里面的美人,春天不必有桃花 :)
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7grizzly
Cheery verses brighten the day. Thanks for sharing.
C
CBA7
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
C
CBA7
我这首诗是借花写人,是从男士的角度写给女士的,是一种爱的表达,对桃花的爱层层递进,写在诗里的桃花是最爱的。
移花接木
桃花在中国文化里有情的含义对吗?
C
CBA7
对于中国文化,移哥应该比我精通得多啊。“桃花潭水深千尺,不及汪伦送我情”,汪伦道:“桃花者,潭水名也,并无桃花“。