In the world, my grandma loved me mostly. Thinking of her, my heart is full of happiness and appreciation.
In my home, my grandma,my father and I were born in December, and our birthdays were very closing. My grandma had natural curly hair, my father and I followed her.
My grandma loved me deeply and selflessly.
In the winter, she always sent me to school personally. In the dark early morning, she and I walked side by side, harsh wind blowed wildly. My heart was warm due to my grandma being with me; she woke up early to prepare delicious food for me; she encouraged me and asked me to continue while I was lost; while my daughter was born, she stayed with me and helped me to survive; while I didn't go back home on a Friday night, she was worried and worried, and she asked around all my colleagues, she only wanted to know I was oaky. When she found that I played mahjong and forgot the time to be back home, she gave me a scolding eye and said nothing...
I was spoiled by my family members especially by my kind gentle grandma. Grandma loved me without any thoughts, in her eyes I was the best...
Dear grandma, hopefully you have a very very good life in the heaven!
In the world, my grandma loved me mostly. Thinking of her, my heart is full of happiness and appreciation.
In my home, my grandma,my father and I were born in December, and our birthdays were very closing. My grandma had natural curly hair, my father and I followed her.
My grandma loved me deeply and selflessly.
In the winter, she always sent me to school personally. In the dark early morning, she and I walked side by side, harsh wind blowed wildly. My heart was warm due to my grandma being with me; she woke up early to prepare delicious food for me; she encouraged me and asked me to continue while I was lost; while my daughter was born, she stayed with me and helped me to survive; while I didn't go back home on a Friday night, she was worried and worried, and she asked around all my colleagues, she only wanted to know I was oaky. When she found that I played mahjong and forgot the time to be back home, she gave me a scolding eye and said nothing...
I was spoiled by my family members especially by my kind gentle grandma. Grandma loved me without any thoughts, in her eyes I was the best...
Dear grandma, hopefully you have a very very good life in the heaven!
Miss you a lot, my dear wonderful grandma!
更多我的博客文章>>>
My grandma who loved me mostly in the world 奶奶常入梦 梦醒泪满巾 我的曾祖母 侃侃女人的装嫩 辈分的无奈感与沧桑感好文章都不是写出来的，而是 改 出来的。
不用指望别人给改，而是自己在一篇东西写完第一稿后，每天回来修改。我在美国曾长期从事文字方面的工作。一篇将要广泛发送的东西，我经常早早写出初稿后，连续好些天，每天都拿出来看一两遍，反反复复修改推敲 ---
哪两个前后句子是否可以变成一个带从句的复合句？ 哪个词语还不够准确、我今天又想起了 / 今天阅读中又遇到一个更加贴切的表达法，赶紧改过来 分段、段落或句子的前后排序是否应该调整，以增强逻辑性？等等。如果你把上面这篇短文连续十来天做了这样的修改，你会发现：最后的完成稿与第一稿简直天差地别！文字质量大幅度提高，行文远比初稿通顺，重复出现的句式/句子结构（比如你文中以 In the __ 开头的句式）一扫而光。这样写一篇东西，比你写十篇“一蹴而就”的文章，在提升写作水平方面的效果要强百倍。