Why did I dream of you last night? 缘何梦君？
Now morning is pushing back hair with grey light 拂晓暗褪
Memories strike home, like slaps in the face; 旧忆叩扉
Raised on elbow, I stare at the pale fog 以肘支颐
beyond the window. 透窗凝雾
So many things I had thought forgotten 原以皆忘
Return to my mind with stranger pain: 岂料忆溃
—Like letters that arrive addressed to someone 似笺翩至
Who left the house so many years ago. 昔人已去
Now morning is pushing back hair with grey light. 有人译为“此刻青白的晨光梳理着鬓发”，也许雅致有欠，但够信够达。（另有人以为“grey”是说诗人已白头，但此诗虽是诗人去世后才结集出版，但写成此诗时诗人才17岁（1939年）。） 译成四言，也许以“晨曦拂发”等形式更达意？
前尘已息，岂料忆溃 -> 前尘似忘， 梦回更伤。
Why did I dream of you last night? 缘何梦君？
Why did I dream of you last night? 缘何梦君？
Now morning is pushing back hair with grey light 拂晓暗褪
Memories strike home, like slaps in the face; 旧忆叩扉
Raised on elbow, I stare at the pale fog 以肘支颐
beyond the window. 透窗凝雾
So many things I had thought forgotten 原以皆忘
Return to my mind with stranger pain: 岂料忆溃
—Like letters that arrive addressed to someone 似笺翩至
Who left the house so many years ago. 昔人已去
Now morning is pushing back hair with grey light. 有人译为“此刻青白的晨光梳理着鬓发”，也许雅致有欠，但够信够达。（另有人以为“grey”是说诗人已白头，但此诗虽是诗人去世后才结集出版，但写成此诗时诗人才17岁（1939年）。） 译成四言，也许以“晨曦拂发”等形式更达意？
前尘已息，岂料忆溃 -> 前尘似忘， 梦回更伤。