英文诗【Her Last Hour】

天玉之
楼主 (文学峸)

 

 

              【Her Last Hour】


 


 

 

                By Tian Yu Zhi


 

 

 

 

Almost finished her evening jog,

She waited at the traffic light, to return home

The light changed to a pedestrian walk sign

She picked up her feet and moved forward ——

At that split second, her fate collided with

A stranger’s decision to speed up and run a red light

She heard sighs, sound of flute arise from a valley 


 

 


Her pink tee shirt did not reflect 

The brilliance of her humanity

Her will of steel could not stop the force of velocity 

In slow motion, a red flower bloomed 

On dark cement of reality

Plum petals began a journey of 

Descending, in spirals, to eternity 

 

 

 


At 6:35pm, May 25th, 2021 

 

 

 

Two days before her big birthday 

One day before receiving a love poem that 

She has been waiting for, all her life

Four days before a 5K race,

Her son and she organized for the Asian Heritage Month 

Seven days before she greets another 100 students 

Two hours before she finishes a draft for a poem 

Titled “On This Day”, for him.

 

 

 

These actions would have happened sooner

Had they knew,

The dark side of time and patience 

 

 

 

 



                    2021.5.25

 


 

 

* I went out for a jog this evening and was almost killed by a SUV running a red light. 惊恐之余,提笔记之。

 

 

 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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英文诗【Her Last Hour】 【今天是我的生日】 【Floating Clouds & May Storms】 中英双语诗【五月的一个早晨】 【Venom of Absurdity】
盈盈一笑间
沙发! 玉教授随时记录生活点滴,中英文自如切换!
移花接木
I adopted defensive drive tech 2 walk since my era of drive

driving 

二郎桥
怎么诗和画是冰火两重天?难道只是我一个人的感觉?
天玉之
早晨好,盈盈!其实,感觉中英文,哪个都不自如,怯怯地在探索中行走,不过,我有耐心和毅力。。。
天玉之
看来只看交通指示灯是不够了,因为太多distracted drivers


说说啥叫 defense tech 2 walk?

moon walk?

 

:)

天玉之
两张图表示before and after the incident, 第一张很和谐,第二张是 abstract art,

不和谐,隐约见血,in a state of chaos。。。像是事故场景

二郎桥
有意思。。。
天玉之
谢谢!早晨好 ~~
天玉之
看来我得摇着个小旗子过马路了。。。
移花接木
Here is my story

I was the 1st one approaching the intersection with solid green light. Two lanes roads. with a few cars behind and to the right. I was on the 2nd lane from the sidewalk. A very dim morning with low visibility.

About a few meters to cross. An electrical wheelchair was in my eye corner by the sidewalk, thought he was waiting for the light to cross, but he  jumped on to the road, so fast the next second he was right in front me, dark color, the rider was also in a dark coat without refelecting strips. He was literally blinded in the dark gray asphalt road.

I was at the dead speed limit 60km/h, I braced the brake all the way down to the floor, no way I  could stop the car in 5 meters. ABS brake lowers the braking efficiency, increase brake distance, but doesnt lock steering front wheels allow you to steer in emergency.    Braking and meanwhile steering, the car stopped, just missed him by a hair!

I knew I didn't hit him, I couldn't see how close, he was at the front right corner of the hood. That close!

The guy wakened from day dream, tried to run back to the sidewalk, he had to cross right lane, I knew there was cars on that lane behind me. 

I braced the horn crazy to sound alarm to others

I wasn't even scared, not time, only after I arrived at work, spoke to others , my legs started trembling.

盈盈一笑间
都这么能写啊!!!赞
盈盈一笑间
亲爱的,你太谦虚了。我要向你学习。。
二郎桥
Good job though:) to save a life!
天玉之
真吓人。。。那辆SUV 也是突然出现,明明是行人走路的灯标,missed me by a hair, 幸亏我起步慢了些,要不就撞

 

上了

 

那辆车嗖地在我面前穿过,我能感到它的风。。。速度很快

 

我禁不住摊开手。。。在交通口四面停着的车,可以感到他们对刚目睹的事的惊讶和为我的恐惧。。。

 

唉,差点儿给撞死了,到现在想起来还后怕。。。

 

生死可以是几秒之间的事,所有的计划,感知,骤然停止

陶陶三
真好,电影可以帮助诗,诗可以帮助电影,浓妆淡抹总相宜。:-)
天玉之
谢谢陶导!嗯,学写电影的确帮助我 how to visually tell a story...
陶陶三
是啊,画面感很强,还调动了音乐,还有舞蹈。:-)
天玉之
谢谢分享!写得好 ~~
天玉之
呵呵,记得您说过,电影剧本要借助音乐,舞蹈。。。
天玉之
一起学习,你英语读得很好听
A
AP33912
还好没事,好惊险,那半秒的惊魂之作。
青松站
A CAT HAS .. Nine Lives ...

Love you _1-1,English - Chinese

A  Thousand Y ears

English

In her own way,

Su Shi D ing ...- ^ ^ 

 

Chinese

盈盈一笑间
梅雨潭朗读高手太多。俺战战兢兢地谢谢鼓励。:))
天玉之
谢谢读!是啊,好险!生命可以在一两秒钟消逝,那些计划好的事,随之而去。。。令人感叹,早晨好!~
天玉之
Wow, 一直喜欢 Christina Perri 的歌,Darling, I have loved you

a thousand years, I have died everyday waiting for you... 歌词很配诗!

 

另外那个歌手唱得也很激情。。。 多谢贴歌助兴! 早晨好! ~~

b
beautifulwind
哇,压压惊,压压惊,给教授压压惊:

 

b
beautifulwind
Narrow escape!记得这是你刚来美坛发生的事。在刚变绿灯时,我启动时开车从不超过我两边的车,以防万一。
天玉之
谢谢,亲爱的,真好听!嗯,下次过那个路口,会忐忑不安一些日子,也好,更小心了,美国朋友告诉我

 

不要只相信路灯,即使路灯指示是该你走了,也要和左右司机先有 eye contact, 然后再走。。。

 

Good advice!

移花接木
这个时候更得小心借covid发泄,报复社会的loser, 用车当犯罪工具故意为之.
移花接木
我还真忘了, 还以为只是口头用英语说的, 我在笑坛用汉语打过字
b
beautifulwind
难道我的记性真比我想象得好?我居然还记得是你在跟帖里说的。你还真没说错,是你当初给我在美坛看的link

https://bbs.wenxuecity.com/mysj/215138.html

a narrow escape是我们当时刚学完一句话翻译时学的narrow  lead,

你活学活用了narrow escape

 

忒忒绿
诗歌叙事棒棒哒!
忒忒绿
两个惊险故事
天山晨
边读诗边琢磨你的这次风险,是很吓人的!不过有诗为证挺好的。鲜上玉兰花!玉教压压惊!

天玉之
多谢天山君!很好看的玉兰花!我也种了一棵,是粉色的。嗯,写诗当记日记用 ~~
天玉之
我妹也这么说,很有可能的,谢谢
天玉之
Good tip!
天玉之
谢谢!是的。这首诗通过这个incident, 说得是 the uncertainty and fragility in our

lives, 夜长梦多 :)

m
moiausis
写得真好!读后看最后的抽象画,更是触目惊心的感觉!
甜虫虫
hugs
天玉之
谢谢!想起都后怕,感叹 the unbearable lightness of being, often controlled

by unforeseen things

 

珍惜现在的每一刻, 所拥有的美好,因为它们可以稍瞬即逝

 

新周愉快!~

天玉之
Thanks! Hugs, I need it, 新周愉快!~~
b
beautifulwind
恭喜玉教。首页进来,谢谢网管,英文诗【Her Last Hour】推荐成功
天玉之
太好了,谢谢网管,美版推荐! 来美语坛后,挂首的贴那么多,多谢各位扶持,诗友鼓励捧场!~~