【梅雨潭的爱】【Time to say good bye】

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楼主 (文学峸)

开了15年的爱车被冰雹砸了,被保险公司报废了。车子被拖走的那天有感而写。

【Time to say good bye】

It seems to be last night

You came with beauty and shy

Washed you all the time

Made you prettier and shine

With the years passed by

We traveled to parks and countryside

Even to cities mile high

So much joy and delight

Memories bring me smile

Also make me want to cry

Happy journey ended with hailing and flash light

Now it's time to say good bye

With tears in my eye

I cannot decide what to buy

A new convertible sounds about right

Will make me cool and my numbered hair fly

Hope my wife will not have my dream denied

Make me again a happy guy

   
盈盈一笑间
好有趣的小诗!短评最后两句:Happy wife, happy life. Make your wife happy first

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Absolutely :) Good point :)
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ibelieu
I really like this piece; sad, full of nostalgia, at first, and

it then, without missing a beat, shifts to unbridled humor.  Reading it made my day.  People tend to get emotionally attached to their first set of wheels.  I also wrote a piece in memory of my first car.  Anyway, I hope you get your wish and thanks for sharing.

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Thank you very much for your compliments.
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ibelieu
Good advice.
唐古
your love to your old car won't die
陶陶三
唯一美中不足,就是完美。:-)
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I think so too :-)
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:-) Thank you very much
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谢谢版主 :-)
轻轻的我来
Well write ! Old love is true love.
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beautifulwind
U mean, new love is not true love?:)
日月茗
excellent writing!
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Thanks. Love is love :-)
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Thank you :-)
轻轻的我来
new love needs testing.
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beautifulwind
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移花接木
这歌词真牛
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beautifulwind
恭喜回答。首页进来,谢谢网管,Time to say good bye 推荐成功(推荐文学城首页成功)
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谢谢喜欢 :-)
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谢谢版主推荐。
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beautifulwind
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Thank you, will do :-)
爱听歌的奥黛丽
写得真好啊!泪中带笑:)
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:-)