下班了也凑热闹来个低配版“ 江雪”

欲借嵯峨
楼主 (文学峸)

I started singing, birds vanished
I started playing my guitar, people run away.
Felt sad and lonely.
A fish jumped out of water laughing at me.
I BBQ it with acetylene torch
 

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beautifulwind
1?有歌词了,怎么不弹唱出来?上班之后下了班,是多么幸福的事,怎么又lonely and sad啦?:)
欲借嵯峨
柳宗元也肯定感觉 sad and lonely, 假装超然,朝廷给个机会放下鱼竿跑得比谁都快:)
陶陶三
可以弹唱Country Road。还是温馨、快乐得好。:-)
移花接木
dark humor, 这是有多难听啊,我不跑,捂住耳朵就行了
陶陶三
所以我说他学渊明而不到。学渊明,totally forget it。男人不要惦记政治,这很酷。:-)
轻轻的我来
Poor fish, good writting taste!
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beautifulwind
试着改了一下语法:

“When Istarted singing, birds vanished
When I started playing my guitar, people ran away.
Ifelt sad and lonely.
A fish jumped out of water laughing at me.
I BBQed it with acetylene torch.”

原则:一句话里只有一个谓语(动词)
 

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beautifulwind
轻诗人给唱出来了:)
盈盈一笑间
哈哈,写的很风趣,让人忍不住露出了微笑。。
陶陶三
唱得好!
青松站
Craft-Workermanship-^^,^
甜虫虫
哈哈哈,好好玩!