石磨 余秀华 翻译

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楼主 (文学峸)

和盈盈一样很余秀华的石磨,两年前翻译过,贴在英文网站,还有一条留言

石磨 余秀华

 

横店的石磨上,谁栓住了我前世今生
谁蒙住了我的眼睛
磨眼里喂进三月,桃花,一页风流
磨眼里喂稗草,苍耳,水花生
——假如风能养活我,谁就不小心犯了错
我转动的上磨大于横店,横店是静止的下磨
大于横店的部分有我的情,我的罪,我的梦和绝望
磨眼里喂世人的冷,一个人的硬
磨眼里喂进散,大雾,雪
——风不仅仅养活了我,谁一错再错
谁扯下我的眼罩,我还是驮着石磨转动
白天和夜里的速度一样
没有人喂的磨眼掉进石头,压着桃花
掉进世俗,压住悲哀
——这样的转动仅仅是转动

Stone mill


To the stone mill in the village Hengdian, who tethers my past life and this life
Who blindfolds my eyes
The eye of the mill is fed with March, peach blossom, a one-page affair
Feed the eye of the mill cockspur, cocklebur, alligator week
-If wind can feed me, someone must have carelessly made a mistake

The runner stone rotated by me is larger than Hengdian, Hengdian is the still bed stone
The part larger than Hengdian holds my feeling, my sin, my dream and despair
The eye of the mill is fed with people’s coldness, one person’s hardness
The eye of the mill is fed with herb granules, thick fog, snow
-Wind does more than feeding me, who’s wrong over and over again

Who pulls off my blindfold, I still carry and rotate the stone mill
At the same speed in the day and at night
Grits fall into the the eye of the abandoned mill, oppress peach blossom
Conventions of society fall into, repress sorrow
-A rotation like this is merely a rotation

originally written in Chinese by Xiuhua You, translated by XX

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Dr.Ram Mehta - You have written very thought provoking expressions on life's adversity2 years ago 

盈盈一笑间
哇,石磨也翻译成英文啦!太棒了!我很喜欢余秀华的这首诗。先点赞,再来慢慢欣赏!BTW,别忘了去楼下听歌,今天我主持。:)
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beautifulwind
今天周三,先去楼下听歌写作业点卯,哈哈:)
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beautifulwind
翻译得真棒,中文没看懂的地方,看英文明白了:)
盈盈一笑间
同感。比如,磨眼里喂进散,大雾,雪。散原来是herb granules的意思。。
盈盈一笑间
Conventions of society fall into, repress sorrow -A rotation lik
盈盈一笑间
A rotation like this is merely a rotation 这句翻译得好,让全诗升华的感觉
盈盈一笑间
看到颤音回来,突然想起 LYJiang 江小羊同学,好久也没来了?:)
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beautifulwind
自从颁奖典礼,他就失踪了,我猜是颁奖典礼太难听,把他吓跑了:)
盈盈一笑间
哈哈,为了证明妖妖的话是错误的, LYJiang 江小羊 同学,请速来美坛报道一下吧!:)
颤音
谢谢所有读贴留言和鼓励
忒忒绿
忒忒绿
millstone, millstones, millstone mill, mill stone, stone mill
天山晨
好译!横店建议译成Horistore
颤音
谢谢! Great fun!
颤音
谢谢建议! 好像她住的村庄叫横店
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beautifulwind
开心得到羚羊的回复,他现在忙于他的一个project。 他说:“Please kindly let 盈盈 know that I

I miss everyone. I will be back when I am done with my project.”

对了,他表扬了颁奖典礼:)

盈盈一笑间
谢谢妖妖的好消息!太好了!盼望江小羊同学早日回美坛归队!撒花~ ~