A nocturnal blue morpho

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A nocturnal blue morpho


A blue morpho
alone
flies in the dark
in the mist
His blue wings no longer brilliant
but wet
Unlike his peers
he believes colors are to be touched
rather than seen


© 6 hours ago

Likes: ShelleyA, KenSmith, R Byron

R Byron - lovely

5 hours ago 

 

KenSmith -
A feel to the poem, the words fluttering in darkness.

5 hours ago 

 

ShelleyA - A delightful write about this special butterfly. Good brevity. Good depth of feeling. Good imagery as is the color and shade in your words that promote and evoke emotion. You paint a picture any reader can appreciate and see in their mind’s eye. Well penned and an enjoyable read. Write on!

5 hours ago 

 

n
nearby
Nice!
l
lovecat08
译中,请!
望沙
l
lovecat08
+100
n
nearby
+1
n
nearby
颤音来回个帖啊,我们好把你的大作顶上去
颤音
谢谢邻兄
颤音
谢谢,跟又一个谷歌版
颤音
谢谢沙和喵
颤音
来了就来了,为了置顶拼了 哈哈哈
颤音
谷歌版

夜间活动的蓝色闪蝶


蓝色闪蝶
独自的
在黑暗中飞翔
在雾中
他的蓝色翅膀不再灿烂
但湿
不像他的同龄人
他相信颜色是可以触摸的
而不是看到

n
nearby
+2
n
nearby
就是嘛,你看网红们,为了'红',啥都舍得。我们的要求低,只是回个帖 :-)
l
ling_yin_shi
诗人想求偶了。:)