Fantasy What am I walking on, sand or salt? Does it matter? Yes, salt lives in the sea And sand lives by the sea I prefer to walk on salt- Tingling my feet Rather than melting on my tongue
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Jenny Middleton - Lovely merging of elements in this poem.23 hours ago
Line Gauthier - Fun poem. Nice to create light poetry in these times of much concern.9 days ago
- I really appreciate your wonderful comments! Pray for its end.9 days ago
【 在 nola1998 (cougar2012) 的大作中提到: 】 : Fantasy : What am I walking on, sand or salt? : Does it matter? : Yes, salt lives in the sea : And sand lives by the sea : I prefer to walk on salt- : Tingling my feet : Rather than melting on my tongue : : Like (3) : ...................
Fantasy
What am I walking on, sand or salt?
Does it matter?
Yes, salt lives in the sea
And sand lives by the sea
I prefer to walk on salt-
Tingling my feet
Rather than melting on my tongue
Like (3)
Comment - What did you think?
Likes: Bryan Lunsford, Jenny Middleton, Line GauthierTo reply, click a
comment.
Jenny Middleton - Lovely merging of elements in this poem.23 hours ago
Line Gauthier - Fun poem. Nice to create light poetry in these times of much concern.9 days ago
- I really appreciate your wonderful comments! Pray for its end.9
days ago
Line Gauthier - Absolutely.
我习惯性地以为后三句也是salt和sand的对比，找不到sand顿感失落……
【 在 nola1998 (cougar2012) 的大作中提到: 】
: Fantasy
: What am I walking on, sand or salt?
: Does it matter?
: Yes, salt lives in the sea
: And sand lives by the sea
: I prefer to walk on salt-
: Tingling my feet
: Rather than melting on my tongue
:
: Like (3)
: ...................
谢谢问号 也被另一网友提到 该补两句哈
【 在 wh (wh) 的大作中提到: 】
: 我习惯性地以为后三句也是salt和sand的对比，找不到sand顿感失落……