又到了夏校申请季,可以帮改Essays

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我在一所R1大学教写作,本科生和研究生都教过,每年都给申请大学的高中生和申请夏校的学生改essays。这几天已经改了好几篇夏校申请信。有需要的请短我改写内容和收费,现在不需要的可以留个信息以后联系,谢谢。
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请问您改的跟ChatGPT 改的有什么优势?
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王力宏 发表于 2025-02-03 16:29
请问您改的跟ChatGPT 改的有什么优势?

不知道,我们搞写作的都不会、也看不上用ChatGPT来写东西(brainstorming可以)。同时, admission officer也不傻,一眼就可以看出一篇essay是不是有机器生成的味道
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https://www.dailytarheel.com/article/2025/01/university-ai-followup 楼主我不是和你抬杠 UNC最近有两篇采访讲他们用AI来给essay从纯写作的角度打分 Duke去年就取消了审阅大学申请材料的文书打分。 https://www.dukechronicle.com/article/2024/02/duke-university-undergraduate-admissions-changes-numerical-rating-standardized-testing-essays-covid-test-optional-ai-generated-college-consultants 是不是有AI辅助写作的成分没有哪个AO可以一眼百分比确定,因为写一篇文章也不可能就机器一个prompt就提交了,可能有多次修改推敲来回给AI不同微调的prompt,然后有一些词汇是固定说法如果AI换了个类似的非固定搭配,人也会自己修正过来。
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Duke He also wrote that the admissions office now values essays that give “insight into who the unique person is whose application we’re reading” and that “content and insight matter more than style.” Emory https://apply.emory.edu/apply/faq.html AI as a Writing Coach, Not a Creator. For years, students have sought feedback from family, teachers, school counselors, and mentors on their personal narratives. They remain the best coaches for you. While AI and similar tools can provide some assistance and feedback, it is essential that your thoughts, voice, and story remain at the core of your application. AI tools could polish or refine, but they should not replace or generate your personal input or creativity. If you choose to use AI for editing, treat it as a suggestive tool to enhance your writing, not to create it. For example, AI might help you clarify your thoughts in the Activities section of the Common Application or organize ideas in a personal statement. Emory values the originality and individuality that only you can offer and preserving your voice is of the utmost importance.
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