Wooo that's mean . I don't see any self pity and woo is me in the essays . It's a story of acceptance, community and influence . Much better than the cookie cutter essays . If I were an AO , I would have chose this kiddo over some typical cookie cutter who seems all over the place and great , but if you look deeper , they know nothing what they want , or who they are . Just the poster image their anxious parents have trimmed and built for them . This kid , with or without great college acceptance, is going to place and will go far. 总之, 是一篇非常有爱/鼓舞人的文章。那么的脚踏实地,那么忠于自我的孩子。希望他能进到自己心中理想的学校!
半个马和甲 发表于 2024-04-27 14:15 Wooo that's mean . I don't see any self pity and woo is me in the essays . It's a story of acceptance, community and influence . Much better than the cookie cutter essays . If I were an AO , I would have chose this kiddo over some typical cookie cutter who seems all over the place and great , but if you look deeper , they know nothing what they want , or who they are . Just the poster image their anxious parents have trimmed and built for them . This kid , with or without great college acceptance, is going to place and will go far. 总之, 是一篇非常有爱/鼓舞人的文章。那么的脚踏实地,那么忠于自我的孩子。希望他能进到自己心中理想的学校!
半个马和甲 发表于 2024-04-27 14:15 Wooo that's mean . I don't see any self pity and woo is me in the essays . It's a story of acceptance, community and influence . Much better than the cookie cutter essays . If I were an AO , I would have chose this kiddo over some typical cookie cutter who seems all over the place and great , but if you look deeper , they know nothing what they want , or who they are . Just the poster image their anxious parents have trimmed and built for them . This kid , with or without great college acceptance, is going to place and will go far. 总之, 是一篇非常有爱/鼓舞人的文章。那么的脚踏实地,那么忠于自我的孩子。希望他能进到自己心中理想的学校!
看了篇 essay. 就能看出别人小孩 know nothing what they want, or what they are?
就分享下。所以感觉essay的确还是重要。对某些non liberal art学校来说基本35% gpa, 25% EC, 25% essay, 15%其他吧。
同问
看了几遍没看懂。下面又有个问的,意识到要这篇文章。就google搜的。
http://www.madisonhouseautism.org/wp-content/uploads/2014/10/Sample_Brag_Sheet_Final.pdf
这文章一看就是满心的要当科学家的nerd学生啊。简直没有任何其他余地。
这也挺好,做合适自己的事。爱因斯坦这种的,很多科学家估计都在spectrum上,对人类的贡献也很大。
同意。看完了这篇自叙,有病说病加分的吧。
Wooo that's mean . I don't see any self pity and woo is me in the essays . It's a story of acceptance, community and influence . Much better than the cookie cutter essays . If I were an AO , I would have chose this kiddo over some typical cookie cutter who seems all over the place and great , but if you look deeper , they know nothing what they want , or who they are . Just the poster image their anxious parents have trimmed and built for them .
This kid , with or without great college acceptance, is going to place and will go far.
总之, 是一篇非常有爱/鼓舞人的文章。那么的脚踏实地,那么忠于自我的孩子。希望他能进到自己心中理想的学校!
你总不能写“我爸爸是律师,我家有钱请私教,我学什么都有最好的私教帮助所以我有了这两成绩。。。。”这种吧。当然要写如何客服困难的。他的困难就是自闭。实际这还是个老实孩子,自闭都写了。有些人担心学校不录,心理脆弱需要长期看医生吃药 也不提的。
英文好好啊。
看了篇 essay. 就能看出别人小孩 know nothing what they want, or what they are?
是的, 真的很难说, 如果是真的有特殊需求有disability 的孩子, 在essay 中说出来, 是有利还是不利于申请呢? 所以这个孩子还是比较老实比较勇敢的
autism有的没的?你试试当当闭娃(哪怕高功)的父母体会一下有多难,父母和娃从小就在每天挣扎中度过
autism不同于肢体残疾,很多大学不愿意收,哪怕是高功,因为很多学校把自闭和mental health联系在一起。这个孩子把自己的情况写出来是很勇敢的,不一定加分,但是说实话会找到更合适和接纳自己的学校。
这么喜欢弱肉强食,为什么不留在丛林社会,到“圣母”的美国来做什么?他们自己贪图美国的好处,看到有占不到的“便宜”, 把他们难受得怒火中烧。精致利己到极点了。
那个人已经被我屏蔽了,看到楼上的引用,又一次刷新了 底线!