Dream Dream of losing. Dream of winning. Dream of forsaking. Dream of reclaiming. Dream of oblivion, dream of reminiscence. Dream of emptiness. Dream of bleakness. Dream of darkness. Dream of void. Dream of pain. Dream of devastation. Dream of purple lotus that float on a river, of a river that flows through a forest, of a forest that snows in winter, of a winter that never ceases to end. Dream of a grey sky outside a window, of a window inside a tiny apartment, of an apartment filled with loneliness from a human—that's him, or her! Dream of your first love. And then, your last. When you finally wake up, there will be tears in your eyes.
Dream of losing. Dream of winning. Dream of forsaking. Dream of reclaiming. Dream of oblivion, dream of reminiscence. Dream of emptiness. Dream of bleakness. Dream of darkness. Dream of void. Dream of pain. Dream of devastation. Dream of purple lotus that float on a river, of a river that flows through a forest, of a forest that snows in winter, of a winter that never ceases to end. Dream of a grey sky outside a window, of a window inside a tiny apartment, of an apartment filled with loneliness from a human—that's him, or her!
Dream of your first love. And then, your last. When you finally wake up, there will be tears in your eyes.
女儿挺敏感的，写的不错👍
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自己的儿子女儿叫弟弟妹妹 ??!!!!!
这这
建议这里的同学 多学习学习 19 世纪的 艾米莉·狄金森
估计想超越她很难很难
问问她这是不是模仿的巴黎那首名诗。这是一个视觉变化的套路写作，如果她没有看过别人写的，那还是很不错的！
感觉 狄金森 写的更好