贴一首我女儿小时候写的，可能是8岁左右。我也很喜欢她的老师 Mrs. Livingston。 To Mrs. Livingston Roses are red violets are blue, sugar is sweet and so are you! Roses are red violets are blue, puppies are friendly and so are you! Roses are red violets are blue, actresses are pretty and so are you! Roses are red violets are blue, professors are smart and so are you! Roses are red violets are blue, flowers smell good and so do you! Roses are red violets are blue, I hope your day is as great as you!
贴一首我女儿小时候写的，可能是8岁左右。我也很喜欢她的老师 Mrs. Livingston。 To Mrs. Livingston Roses are red violets are blue, sugar is sweet and so are you! Roses are red violets are blue, puppies are friendly and so are you! Roses are red violets are blue, actresses are pretty and so are you! Roses are red violets are blue, professors are smart and so are you! Roses are red violets are blue, flowers smell good and so do you! Roses are red violets are blue, I hope your day is as great as you!
贴一首我女儿小时候写的，可能是8岁左右。我也很喜欢她的老师 Mrs. Livingston。 To Mrs. Livingston Roses are red violets are blue, sugar is sweet and so are you! Roses are red violets are blue, puppies are friendly and so are you! Roses are red violets are blue, actresses are pretty and so are you! Roses are red violets are blue, professors are smart and so are you! Roses are red violets are blue, flowers smell good and so do you! Roses are red violets are blue, I hope your day is as great as you!
贴一首我女儿小时候写的，可能是8岁左右。我也很喜欢她的老师 Mrs. Livingston。 To Mrs. Livingston Roses are red violets are blue, sugar is sweet and so are you! Roses are red violets are blue, puppies are friendly and so are you! Roses are red violets are blue, actresses are pretty and so are you! Roses are red violets are blue, professors are smart and so are you! Roses are red violets are blue, flowers smell good and so do you! Roses are red violets are blue, I hope your day is as great as you!
估计是哪里看看，自己又发挥一下，哈哈 还有一首，也是给她老师的，这个我记得，五年级了。 文笔成熟了点，这时候已经会押韵了。这个老师我太爱了，真的是只要她在，满屋生辉的那种。 就象女儿写的，You always light up every single room, 以前给我和老公也写过，我怎么找不到了。 To Mrs. Trafton I think your presence is a pleasure, that’s worth more than lots of treasure. You are as sweet like a flower in bloom, You always light up every single room, Your laughter is sweet, like an early bird’s tweet, Your voice is like a harp, It is never too sharp, It is like a song, that’s not too long. Your smile is bright, like a shining light, It dazzlies my eys, it never says goodbyes It is always there, you’ll always know where Your magical in a way, that you’ll find out one day.
贴一首我女儿小时候写的，可能是8岁左右。我也很喜欢她的老师 Mrs. Livingston。 To Mrs. Livingston Roses are red violets are blue, sugar is sweet and so are you! Roses are red violets are blue, puppies are friendly and so are you! Roses are red violets are blue, actresses are pretty and so are you! Roses are red violets are blue, professors are smart and so are you! Roses are red violets are blue, flowers smell good and so do you! Roses are red violets are blue, I hope your day is as great as you!
这是真实的孩子的想象，上面最后一首也是。
喜欢这个。还有那个抽出了大雾天😄😄😄 孩子们的想象力
好可爱
这个也可爱
第三首也不像，能够想到晒黄做旧，对古董造假程序一定非常熟悉。
To Mrs. Livingston Roses are red violets are blue, sugar is sweet and so are you! Roses are red violets are blue, puppies are friendly and so are you! Roses are red violets are blue, actresses are pretty and so are you! Roses are red violets are blue, professors are smart and so are you! Roses are red violets are blue, flowers smell good and so do you! Roses are red violets are blue, I hope your day is as great as you!
哈哈哈哈哈，你的回复都太有趣
天才啊
可爱，嘴真甜
哈哈哈，难道是古董造假商的孩子？ 我有同学是美院毕业的，毕业后就做古董造假，不过她就是 直接说是仿制的，一点看不出真假。
她很喜欢那个老师。
啊， 好暖心，这是给老师哒？彩虹屁太受用了，好可爱~~你家女儿应该很喜欢她吧。
哈哈好可爱，小孩子真是天生的诗人。
为什么同样形式的诗我看过好几首，这种韵脚好像美国小朋友特喜欢
对，好喜欢那个老师。
我的眼睛很小很小， 有时遇到心事， 两行泪也装不下。
第一首，"这世上的风雨"，听起来老气横秋的，哪像个小孩子
第二首，"等一个人回来"，像等情人，一个小孩子这样说话？(另外后面有个层主问得好，现在的孩子哪知道炭是什么？)
第三首，"把书晒黄，好像已流传了很多年"，这个是谁写的来着？真的在哪儿读过
估计是哪里看看，自己又发挥一下，哈哈 还有一首，也是给她老师的，这个我记得，五年级了。 文笔成熟了点，这时候已经会押韵了。这个老师我太爱了，真的是只要她在，满屋生辉的那种。 就象女儿写的，You always light up every single room, 以前给我和老公也写过，我怎么找不到了。
To Mrs. Trafton
I think your presence is a pleasure, that’s worth more than lots of treasure. You are as sweet like a flower in bloom, You always light up every single room, Your laughter is sweet, like an early bird’s tweet, Your voice is like a harp, It is never too sharp, It is like a song, that’s not too long. Your smile is bright, like a shining light, It dazzlies my eys, it never says goodbyes It is always there, you’ll always know where Your magical in a way, that you’ll find out one day.
同感。没有童真的美好。
看Dr. Seuss长大的
很厉害
我还以为大家都知道是假的，就是冲着形式主义去的。难道，有人会以为那儿有真的东西？
写诗的大都是欲上层楼的孩子吧，细腻敏感，或者童年的本质是悲伤，直到夕阳红才长出来一颗来不及了的童心，所以最美不过夕阳红，温馨又从容。
很不错，有思想了，插图也不错。我也因该去整理下女儿的小作品，挺有趣的。
因该是，我记得以前给女儿念 Teddy bear, Teddy bear, what do you see?... 好多echo 的
写得太棒了！！
好写实啊。
很可爱，小诗人这个得瑟的，哈哈哈，以一己之力成就了整辆自行车
同喜欢
写的很好
赞，第一首很感人，后面的也不错
前两首，大家已经指出了问题。第三首，现在的孩子到哪里能看发黄的古书？古诗不都在语文课本上吗？第四首，基本上就是梨花体，一句话多分几行写，就叫诗了。