我又修改了两处没写对的,现在我有90%以上的信心我已成功完成了我的第一篇英文小故事,

吉木春
楼主 (北美华人网)
虽然用了3、4天才写这么短的一篇,总比一点都没学到强了。一处是 reached 那里,之前用的过去完成时有人说到过那里,一处是 moved on,之前用了现在时。
A doctor was going home after work was done.In the elevator he saw a charming nurse and pressed the light of ground floor on.Weirdly the elevator didn't stop when it reached the ground and kept moving down until to the B3.The door opens,a granny was standing there .The doctor rushed to press the door close button,then the elevator moved on.
''Why did you not let her in?'' The nurse asked with frown on her face.
''Oh my god,She had the morgue's dead body identification tag on her wrist!''Answered the doctor in horror.
''What's wrong with that?''The nurse frowned more tightly.
''What do you mean what's wrong with that?She is a freaking dead body!''
''Oh please~,why are you being so stimulated?I have it too.''The nurse pulled up her sleeve and raised the wrist to the doctor and with a enigmatic smile on her face.
''OH FUCK!''The doctor's eyes gleamed in cold.