同事带领的一个大项目今天做完了，他给几百人的大组发了封信，表示感谢和庆祝，大家觉得这英文怎么样? As of today, all the applications have completed the migration to the new platform! I would like to thank all the teams for their cooperation and efforts. Without your support and coordination, we wouldn’t be able to reach such a huge milestone!
The architecture team initiated this project three years ago and officially kicked off the migration project in June 2019. Over the past 9 months, fourteen teams were involved, 1 million lines of code were rewritten, Axyz framework was mostly removed from the codebase, 70% of the code was converted to TS, 200 new APIs were created. We removed the strong dependency on third party frameworks, established and enforced coding syntax and conventions, built application lifecycle protocols, standardized logging system, improved existing APIs, and finally made the application a real Single Page Application.
I especially wanted to thank the Architecture team for their hard work, can-do attitude, keen eyes for identifying areas for improvement, and passion for building great products. As you know, the Architecture team is quite a small team with only 4 developers, and 3 of them were hired one month before we kicked off the project. It was amazing that they were able to pick up the knowledge immediately and complete such a challenging cross-team project in such a short term period.
I wanted to thank Matt for being such an amazing team lead for the Architecture team, for coordinating 14 teams successfully, for always addressing questions in a timely manner, and for setting up a great role model for the team. I also wanted to thank Mike for his hard work, top-notch technical skills, and his deep caring for the codebase.
With the new architecture, our system is able to provide improved performance, scalability, more stabilized API, and enhanced developer experience.
Again, thanks to everyone for this big accomplishment! Look forward to working with you all on our next project.
同事带领的一个大项目今天做完了，他给几百人的大组发了封信，表示感谢和庆祝，大家觉得这英文怎么样? As of today, all the applications have completed the migration to the new platform! I would like to thank all the teams for their cooperation and efforts. Without your support and coordination, we wouldn’t be able to reach such a huge milestone!
The architecture team initiated this project three years ago and officially kicked off the migration project in June 2019. Over the past 9 months, fourteen teams were involved, 1 million lines of code were rewritten, Axyz framework was mostly removed from the codebase, 70% of the code was converted to TS, 200 new APIs were created. We removed the strong dependency on third party frameworks, established and enforced coding syntax and conventions, built application lifecycle protocols, standardized logging system, improved existing APIs, and finally made the application a real Single Page Application.
I especially wanted to thank the Architecture team for their hard work, can-do attitude, keen eyes for identifying areas for improvement, and passion for building great products. As you know, the Architecture team is quite a small team with only 4 developers, and 3 of them were hired one month before we kicked off the project. It was amazing that they were able to pick up the knowledge immediately and complete such a challenging cross-team project in such a short term period.
I wanted to thank Matt for being such an amazing team lead for the Architecture team, for coordinating 14 teams successfully, for always addressing questions in a timely manner, and for setting up a great role model for the team. I also wanted to thank Mike for his hard work, top-notch technical skills, and his deep caring for the codebase.
With the new architecture, our system is able to provide improved performance, scalability, more stabilized API, and enhanced developer experience.
Again, thanks to everyone for this big accomplishment! Look forward to working with you all on our next project.
同事带领的一个大项目今天做完了，他给几百人的大组发了封信，表示感谢和庆祝，大家觉得这英文怎么样? As of today, all the applications have completed the migration to the new platform! I would like to thank all the teams for their cooperation and efforts. Without your support and coordination, we wouldn’t be able to reach such a huge milestone!
The architecture team initiated this project three years ago and officially kicked off the migration project in June 2019. Over the past 9 months, fourteen teams were involved, 1 million lines of code were rewritten, Axyz framework was mostly removed from the codebase, 70% of the code was converted to TS, 200 new APIs were created. We removed the strong dependency on third party frameworks, established and enforced coding syntax and conventions, built application lifecycle protocols, standardized logging system, improved existing APIs, and finally made the application a real Single Page Application.
I especially wanted to thank the Architecture team for their hard work, can-do attitude, keen eyes for identifying areas for improvement, and passion for building great products. As you know, the Architecture team is quite a small team with only 4 developers, and 3 of them were hired one month before we kicked off the project. It was amazing that they were able to pick up the knowledge immediately and complete such a challenging cross-team project in such a short term period.
I wanted to thank Matt for being such an amazing team lead for the Architecture team, for coordinating 14 teams successfully, for always addressing questions in a timely manner, and for setting up a great role model for the team. I also wanted to thank Mike for his hard work, top-notch technical skills, and his deep caring for the codebase.
With the new architecture, our system is able to provide improved performance, scalability, more stabilized API, and enhanced developer experience.
Again, thanks to everyone for this big accomplishment! Look forward to working with you all on our next project.
废话啰嗦，一段能写完的扯这么长。而且这一段也太傻了 “As you know, the Architecture team is quite a small team with only 4 developers, and 3 of them were hired one month before we kicked off the project. It was amazing that they were able to pick up the knowledge immediately and complete such a challenging cross-team project in such a short term period.”
同事带领的一个大项目今天做完了，他给几百人的大组发了封信，表示感谢和庆祝，大家觉得这英文怎么样? As of today, all the applications have completed the migration to the new platform! I would like to thank all the teams for their cooperation and efforts. Without your support and coordination, we wouldn’t be able to reach such a huge milestone!
The architecture team initiated this project three years ago and officially kicked off the migration project in June 2019. Over the past 9 months, fourteen teams were involved, 1 million lines of code were rewritten, Axyz framework was mostly removed from the codebase, 70% of the code was converted to TS, 200 new APIs were created. We removed the strong dependency on third party frameworks, established and enforced coding syntax and conventions, built application lifecycle protocols, standardized logging system, improved existing APIs, and finally made the application a real Single Page Application.
I especially wanted to thank the Architecture team for their hard work, can-do attitude, keen eyes for identifying areas for improvement, and passion for building great products. As you know, the Architecture team is quite a small team with only 4 developers, and 3 of them were hired one month before we kicked off the project. It was amazing that they were able to pick up the knowledge immediately and complete such a challenging cross-team project in such a short term period.
I wanted to thank Matt for being such an amazing team lead for the Architecture team, for coordinating 14 teams successfully, for always addressing questions in a timely manner, and for setting up a great role model for the team. I also wanted to thank Mike for his hard work, top-notch technical skills, and his deep caring for the codebase.
With the new architecture, our system is able to provide improved performance, scalability, more stabilized API, and enhanced developer experience.
Again, thanks to everyone for this big accomplishment! Look forward to working with you all on our next project.
典型的清格力士。每句话至少1-2个错误。冠词滥用。 好比说第一句： As of today, all the applications have completed the migration to the new platform! I would like to thank all the teams for their cooperation and efforts. Without your support and coordination, we wouldn’t be able to reach such a huge milestone!
Migrate这个动作的主语是人，application应该是宾语。应该说 As of today, all the applications have been migrated to the new platform. 后面一句一会 them 一会 your乱用。应该是 I would like to thank all the teams for your cooperation and efforts. Without your support and coordination, we wouldn’t be able to reach such a major milestone!
同事带领的一个大项目今天做完了，他给几百人的大组发了封信，表示感谢和庆祝，大家觉得这英文怎么样? As of today, all the applications have completed the migration to the new platform! I would like to thank all the teams for their cooperation and efforts. Without your support and coordination, we wouldn’t be able to reach such a huge milestone!
The architecture team initiated this project three years ago and officially kicked off the migration project in June 2019. Over the past 9 months, fourteen teams were involved, 1 million lines of code were rewritten, Axyz framework was mostly removed from the codebase, 70% of the code was converted to TS, 200 new APIs were created. We removed the strong dependency on third party frameworks, established and enforced coding syntax and conventions, built application lifecycle protocols, standardized logging system, improved existing APIs, and finally made the application a real Single Page Application.
I especially wanted to thank the Architecture team for their hard work, can-do attitude, keen eyes for identifying areas for improvement, and passion for building great products. As you know, the Architecture team is quite a small team with only 4 developers, and 3 of them were hired one month before we kicked off the project. It was amazing that they were able to pick up the knowledge immediately and complete such a challenging cross-team project in such a short term period.
I wanted to thank Matt for being such an amazing team lead for the Architecture team, for coordinating 14 teams successfully, for always addressing questions in a timely manner, and for setting up a great role model for the team. I also wanted to thank Mike for his hard work, top-notch technical skills, and his deep caring for the codebase.
With the new architecture, our system is able to provide improved performance, scalability, more stabilized API, and enhanced developer experience.
Again, thanks to everyone for this big accomplishment! Look forward to working with you all on our next project.
和公司相关的内容我早已全改掉，这样的祝贺项目完成的信网上一堆堆的。就算我同事本人来看他也未必能确定这是他写的信。我觉得我的英文水平和他相似，因为我看不出来任何大的语法错误。贴在这儿之前我找了个英文中学老师看了一下，他建议把 applications have migrated to have been migrated, 除此之外，他觉得没什么大问题。我贴出来的目的是想看下大家认为这样的英文是average 还是很差。如果很差，那说明我也需要提高，因为我觉得我和他水平差不多
和公司相关的内容我早已全改掉，这样的祝贺项目完成的信网上一堆堆的。就算我同事本人来看他也未必能确定这是他写的信。我觉得我的英文水平和他相似，因为我看不出来任何大的语法错误。贴在这儿之前我找了个英文中学老师看了一下，他建议把 applications have migrated to have been migrated, 除此之外，他觉得没什么大问题。我贴出来的目的是想看下大家认为这样的英文是average 还是很差。如果很差，那说明我也需要提高，因为我觉得我和他水平差不多 greendeer 发表于 2/29/2020 1:51:00 PM
这个语法错误不是重点 但是太不native 了 老印们不会这么写 比如 i want to thank - team 1 - team 2 就好啊 公司内部邮件属于公司机密。不能也不应该公布。华人常常被卷入间谍纷争，有些是事实，有些是完全没有保护公司信息的概念。比如楼主。你已经违反了公司的规定。如果公司想要开除你。这个就是证据。
As of today, all the applications have completed the migration to the new platform! I would like to thank all the teams for their cooperation and efforts. Without your support and coordination, we wouldn’t be able to reach such a huge milestone!
The architecture team initiated this project three years ago and officially kicked off the migration project in June 2019. Over the past 9 months, fourteen teams were involved, 1 million lines of code were rewritten, Axyz framework was mostly removed from the codebase, 70% of the code was converted to TS, 200 new APIs were created. We removed the strong dependency on third party frameworks, established and enforced coding syntax and conventions, built application lifecycle protocols, standardized logging system, improved existing APIs, and finally made the application a real Single Page Application.
I especially wanted to thank the Architecture team for their hard work, can-do attitude, keen eyes for identifying areas for improvement, and passion for building great products. As you know, the Architecture team is quite a small team with only 4 developers, and 3 of them were hired one month before we kicked off the project. It was amazing that they were able to pick up the knowledge immediately and complete such a challenging cross-team project in such a short term period.
I wanted to thank Matt for being such an amazing team lead for the Architecture team, for coordinating 14 teams successfully, for always addressing questions in a timely manner, and for setting up a great role model for the team. I also wanted to thank Mike for his hard work, top-notch technical skills, and his deep caring for the codebase.
With the new architecture, our system is able to provide improved performance, scalability, more stabilized API, and enhanced developer experience.
Again, thanks to everyone for this big accomplishment! Look forward to working with you all on our next project.
我也这样认为。
Re 楼主赶紧删掉吧
这英文水平在老中圈里算一般还是低于平均水平?
他被我老板（烙印）暗示英语不够好，但我觉得还okay，我自己的水平感觉也和他差不多，所以担心老板会不会也觉得我英语不好
I modified it a lot before posting it here
烙印的英语真好啊。 羡慕中，感觉自己看多少书都写不出烙印的水平.中式排比句我看得还挺激动的 :-)
典型的清格力士。每句话至少1-2个错误。冠词滥用。
好比说第一句：
As of today, all the applications have completed the migration to the new platform! I would like to thank all the teams for their cooperation and efforts. Without your support and coordination, we wouldn’t be able to reach such a huge milestone!
Migrate这个动作的主语是人，application应该是宾语。应该说 As of today, all the applications have been migrated to the new platform.
后面一句一会 them 一会 your乱用。应该是 I would like to thank all the teams for your cooperation and efforts. Without your support and coordination, we wouldn’t be able to reach such a major milestone!
这个人的英文可赖不上G，基本的语法都是错的。倒是应该好好练一下G可以提高。
可以再指出一些语法错误吗？ 学习一下。 我都看不出来有什么大的错误，只是觉得一看就是中国人写的。
还好了，语言的目的只是沟通而已。有必要吹毛求疵吗?
会不会是你modified part造成了大家的这种感觉。。。
和公司相关的内容我早已全改掉，这样的祝贺项目完成的信网上一堆堆的。就算我同事本人来看他也未必能确定这是他写的信。我觉得我的英文水平和他相似，因为我看不出来任何大的语法错误。贴在这儿之前我找了个英文中学老师看了一下，他建议把 applications have migrated to have been migrated, 除此之外，他觉得没什么大问题。我贴出来的目的是想看下大家认为这样的英文是average 还是很差。如果很差，那说明我也需要提高，因为我觉得我和他水平差不多
怎么看出来的？
+1, 华人也真是醉了，一堆英文专家跳出来拿着放大镜挑语法错误，一般这种email 看了知道个大概就行了，句子通顺，意思表达清楚就完了，又不是出书。美国人平时自己写的email还常有语法错误呢
估计这个中国人升上去靠的不是英文水平吧，否则老美个个英文比他强，怎么就没做到他的职位呢，楼主还是多研究一下人家的硬实力吧，别老关注人家的英文
我也觉得已经不错了，版上总有一大堆人鸡蛋里挑骨头。
这个中国人听上去职位已经做到一定level了，如果英文是他软肋的话，估计其他方面，技术上，及做人更强。感觉LZ的关注点错了，另外把公司内部的email这么发上来确实不合适，怎么知道这个中国老板不上华人？
他这个人不太讲话因为口语不好，但务实，交给他组的活没有做不出来的。而且裁人不手软，组里谁都不敢混饭吃。但感觉因为语言问题，他也很难爬高。最高也就是个director 吧
你想多了
这你都看不出来？字里行间都是做好领导的料啊。。。算了你只关心英文水平
你是说夸奖员工？
早不抱希望了
爬不爬得上去，也是看人家的造化，LZ还是多关注一下提高自己的实力吧，别老跟人家较劲
我说过好几次了这封信早已被我改得发信人都认不出来了。又不是Apple 的secret 项目，硅谷几千家公司，上万个组，这样的email 大家天天见，不明白有什么必要纠结。
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