【周末综艺会6期】打call《写在诗里的桃花》《The Peach Blossom Written in My Poetry》

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春天来了,把这首双语小诗分享给星坛的新老朋友们,祝大家的每一天都是人间四月天,桃花满园!

写在诗里的桃花

假如春天只有一朵桃花
你就是第二朵
看在眼里

假如春天只有两朵桃花
你就是第三朵
捧在手里

假如春天只有三朵桃花
你就是第四朵
戴在头上

假如春天只有四朵桃花
你就是第五朵
含在口里

假如春天只有五朵桃花
你就是第六朵
藏在心里

假如春天只有六朵桃花
你就是第七朵
写在诗里

假如春天没有桃花
我还是有桃花
春天不必有桃花

The Peach Blossom Written in My Poetry

if there is only one peach blossom in spring
you are the second one
I see it in my eyes

if there are only two peach blossoms in spring
you are the third one
I hold it in my hand

if there are only three peach blossoms in spring
you are the fourth one
I wear it on my head

if there are only four peach blossoms in spring
you are the fifth one
I hold it in my mouth

if there are only five peach blossoms in spring
you are the sixth one
I hide it in my heart

if there are only six peach blossoms in spring
you are the seventh one
I write it in my poetry

if there are no peach blossoms in spring
I still have my peach blossom
spring doesn't have to have peach blossoms

Comments from Allpoetry (the world's largest and best poetry site):
pandorapoet22 - How refreshingly beautiful and endearing it is to read such a warmhearted and innocent poem. Very well done and thank you so much for sharing this gorgeous gem. May your peach blossoms be many, my friend and may you carry them deep within your heart in whatever you do and wherever you may go.

Garbage bin - I really like the way this piece progresses through each tercet. Each stanza bringing a stronger sense of adoration. Inspired


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云霞姐姐
哎哟妈呀,深夜坐小西诗人的大沙发,自由自在!
云霞姐姐
感觉诗里开满了桃花,美!
晓青
欣赏!太美了!
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CBA7
谢谢云儿来看桃花,云儿面若桃花 ,更美!
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CBA7
谢谢晓青雅临赏花鼓励,晓青领导桃花新潮流 :)
幸福生
到处桃花,这是传说中的桃花运吗?另外,谢谢小西前两天在唱坛的指点,我的《无所不在》已改作,《无所不在的你》
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CBA7
是幸福君的桃云运 :)我这首诗是从男士的角度写给女士的,是一种爱的表达,对桃花的爱层层递进,写在诗里的桃花是最爱的!
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CBA7
幸福君太客气了,谈不上指点,大家相互交流和学习,共同提高。
泽西剑侠
厉害啊!中英文诗同时表达。
C
CBA7
过奖了,谢谢剑侠的鼓励
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laopika
四月桃花开,男士都喜爱:)
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CBA7
哈哈哈,皮卡兄懂桃花,更懂男人 :)
人参花
著名诗人小C, 诗美。
花园朵朵
今天开车在路上一片片的桃花,这诗好应景呀!赞才女的大作!
C
CBA7
花姐过奖了,谢谢花姐雅临赏花和鼓励。
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CBA7
哇 ,朵朵开车路上赏花和网上赏花同步进行,厉害!谢谢朵朵的美言和鼓励,祝朵朵一路顺风,一路芬芳!
唐歌
双语诗很美,好厉害!
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CBA7
谢谢小唐雅临点评,你喜欢,我很高兴!
烟酒嗓
小西诗人这首诗写的真是好,花一样的女子。
艾唱
好久不见好,好开心又读到小c才女的中英文双语美丽而有意境的小诗。希望有人能谱成曲儿,一定很美。
平等性
哎,七妹好久不见,问好!你看,你这刚写了桃花,俺就来一曲应和,难道是心有灵犀一点通吗 :)
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cicila
赞小西双语好诗!灵感满满的七仙女!
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CBA7
谢谢楼上几位才子才女的留言和鼓励!