四句全译，押韵的不够, 试用两个双关，chilling有cold和fun意思，sound有声音和沉(睡)意思
怀君属秋夜
散步咏凉天
空山松子落
幽人应未眠
having you in my mind at this autumn night wandering off, chanting chilling moment in my lyric pine cones dropping toward the depth of the mountain
Alone there shall you be not falling in sound asleep
Missing you at the autum night Wondering upon cooling light Falling pine-cone keeps empty mountain quite
Who stays upright tonight?
“英文诗和我们的很不同，它们还是会保持完整的句子”。留心下，确实如此。
Slang。平时用有冷，惊悚意思
四句全译，押韵的不够, 试用两个双关，chilling有cold和fun意思，sound有声音和沉(睡)意思
怀君属秋夜
散步咏凉天
空山松子落
幽人应未眠
having you in my mind at this autumn night
wandering off, chanting chilling moment in my lyric
pine cones dropping toward the depth of the mountain
Alone there shall you be not falling in sound asleep
Missing you at the autum night
Wondering upon cooling light
Falling pine-cone keeps empty mountain quite
Who stays upright tonight?
“英文诗和我们的很不同，它们还是会保持完整的句子”。留心下，确实如此。
Slang。平时用有冷，惊悚意思