《苔》 The Mosses 作者：袁枚（清） By Yuan May (Qing Dynasty) 翻译：忒绿 Translated by: Tweeting Green 白日不到处， Even though no love from the bright sunshine, 青春恰自来。 Still comes the vigorous green unsent for. 苔花如米小， A moss flower is as small as a rice, 也学牡丹开。 Blooming to compete with any peony in splendour.
The Mosses
where the sunlight does not reach Youth comes by itself. Moss, tiny as a grain of rice, also blooms like a peony.
我个人感觉你加入了太多形容词与自己的感觉。原诗简单白话，甚至有点现代。 所以我就尽可能地使用简单词语。
简版 Without the bright sunshine reaching, They are still naturally growing greeny. A moss flower is as small as a rice, Blooming superbly as same as a peony.
苔花的自立与坚强刻画得越清晰，慈悲与爱怜的情绪越强烈。
第二个版本近乎平铺直叙，诗歌本身深意及作者的当时的心情要读者自己去体会。
诗歌中，作者使用了或者强调了：日之白、恰、小、也…
《苔》
The Mosses
作者：袁枚（清）
By Yuan May (Qing Dynasty)
翻译：忒绿
Translated by: Tweeting Green
白日不到处，
Even though no love from the bright sunshine,
青春恰自来。
Still comes the vigorous green unsent for.
苔花如米小，
A moss flower is as small as a rice,
也学牡丹开。
Blooming to compete with any peony in splendour.
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The Mosses
where the sunlight does not reach
Youth comes by itself.
Moss, tiny as a grain of rice,
also blooms like a peony.
我个人感觉你加入了太多形容词与自己的感觉。原诗简单白话，甚至有点现代。
所以我就尽可能地使用简单词语。
简版
Without the bright sunshine reaching,
They are still naturally growing greeny.
A moss flower is as small as a rice,
Blooming superbly as same as a peony.
苔花的自立与坚强刻画得越清晰，慈悲与爱怜的情绪越强烈。
第二个版本近乎平铺直叙，诗歌本身深意及作者的当时的心情要读者自己去体会。
诗歌中，作者使用了或者强调了：日之白、恰、小、也…