I chase, you run, we're pulling tight Exhausted, is there any hope in sight? Another fight that’s mine alone Your silence feels like a wall of stone Ooh~ Trapped in pain, with memories to hold The last sweet moments, now growing cold
In the quiet room, I lie awake My tears fall, but you don’t see my pain You turn away, no words to share Leaving nothing but silence in the air
Oh~ I just wish we could grow and heal Be the ones who stand and never fail I keep asking why we drift away Why can't we go back to yesterday? Oh~
I thought we were a perfect pair But two straight lines don’t meet anywhere Oh~ I just wish we could grow and heal Be the ones who stand and never fail I keep asking why we drift away Why can't we go back to yesterday? Hmm~
I thought we were a perfect pair But two straight lines don’t meet anywhere Oh~ I just wish we could grow and heal Be the ones who stand and never fail Despite my efforts, I... I thought we were a perfect pair But two straight lines don’t meet anywhere Oh~
I just wish we could grow and heal Be the ones who stand and never fail Despite my efforts, I just can’t see How I can make a miracle for you and me I thought we were a perfect pair But two straight lines don’t meet anywhere
我这首歌(中、英版)的Prompt是: A soft, emotional ballad with slow tempo, highlighting themes of longing, distance, and emotional tension, female singer。其实那些不重要的介词都可以省略。我在Suno上也跟很多大神学到了非常多。
这是我前两周写的一首歌《两条直线》。中文原版我已经送人了,没法贴出来。但我昨天听了大猫的《五个字留给自己》,没忍住,决定贴这首歌的英文版,从女性视角写了两人关系摇摇欲坠时的那种无力、疲惫和心碎。这下子,一对为爱所苦的痴情男女就到齐了(^_-)。
Two Straight Lines
Lyrics: Mu,Zimo Music&Vocals:Suno
I chase, you run, we're pulling tight
Exhausted, is there any hope in sight?
Another fight that’s mine alone
Your silence feels like a wall of stone
Ooh~
Trapped in pain, with memories to hold
The last sweet moments, now growing cold
In the quiet room, I lie awake
My tears fall, but you don’t see my pain
You turn away, no words to share
Leaving nothing but silence in the air
Oh~
I just wish we could grow and heal
Be the ones who stand and never fail
I keep asking why we drift away
Why can't we go back to yesterday?
Oh~
I thought we were a perfect pair
But two straight lines don’t meet anywhere
Oh~
I just wish we could grow and heal
Be the ones who stand and never fail
I keep asking why we drift away
Why can't we go back to yesterday?
Hmm~
I thought we were a perfect pair
But two straight lines don’t meet anywhere
Oh~
I just wish we could grow and heal
Be the ones who stand and never fail
Despite my efforts, I...
I thought we were a perfect pair
But two straight lines don’t meet anywhere
Oh~
I just wish we could grow and heal
Be the ones who stand and never fail
Despite my efforts, I just can’t see
How I can make a miracle for you and me
I thought we were a perfect pair
But two straight lines don’t meet anywhere
Suno写prompt的时候可以用关键词标注曲风、乐器、节奏和情绪。
我这首歌(中、英版)的Prompt是: A soft, emotional ballad with slow tempo, highlighting themes of longing, distance, and emotional tension, female singer。其实那些不重要的介词都可以省略。我在Suno上也跟很多大神学到了非常多。
结尾部分我用Extend功能修改过,所以情绪有起伏就更饱满了。
可是这样出好歌的几率有点低,浪费了好多credits。我后来在Suno上看人家大神出的热门好曲,发现有的prompts甚至非常短,但目标很明确,关键就是曲风、情绪、速度。这是我向大神们学习的心得:一开始就明确自己歌曲的构思和设计会非常有帮助,能出好曲不单单靠Suno的神力,还有你作为幕后“大佬”的指挥能力:配乐设计+歌词编排+修改(crop/extend)。