【Poem Reading Tuesday】大家合写英文歌:【Childhood Memory】童鞋们,六一快乐!

妖妖灵
楼主 (文学城)

It is so exciting that our talented friends of MYSJ have completed the original English lyrics of “Childhood Memory” within only 2 days! The lyrics have excellent rhyming, alliteration, etc poetry skills.  With the help of AI, the cool song “Childhood memory” is now released!:)

Happy International Children's Day to Everyone at MYSJ!

Please join us next time!

 

Comments from 虫虫:

This piece is really nice! It has light-hearted fun memories    来源: 甜虫虫 于 2024-06-01 12:21:03  [档案] [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读: 次 (365 bytes)  字体:调大/重置/调小 | 加入书签 | 打印 | 所有跟帖 | 加跟贴 |  当前最热讨论主题 本文内容已被 [ 甜虫虫 ] 在 2024-06-01 12:25:13 编辑过。如有问题,请报告版主或论坛管理删除.  回答: 【Poem Reading Tuesday】大家和写英文歌:【Childhood Memory 】 童鞋们,六一快乐! 由 妖妖灵 于 2024-06-01 11:07:34

breezy afternoon, azure sky, fish nibbling feet, cicada's chorus, flower garden, and birds' singing paint a vivid picture of peaceful and sensory experience of childhood. 

There is a shift in sentiments in the second stanza. This change gives this piece a sensory depth and adds a philosophical layer to the poem, thanks to Yi Hua :)

 

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【Childhood Memory】

Lyrics written by: 暖冬cool夏(暖)

                            甜虫虫 (虫)

                            移花接木(花)

                            最西边的岛上(岛)

                            妖妖灵(妖)

Composing&arrangement&vocal:AI


 
[Verse]
 
In this breezy and brilliant afternoon (妖)
 
 
The sky is azure like jubilant June(暖)
 
 
Little fish nibble my feet in a small stream (虫)
 
 
In the distance, cicadas stridently scream (虫)
 
 
[Verse]
 
Ideals are set, ideas are given(花)
 
 
There is no Hell, there is no Heaven (花)
 
 
An endless field of flowering garden(岛)
 
 
Butterflies flying and birds singing (岛)

 
[Chorus]
 
Doctrines breed the obedient generation(花)
 
 
Carefree characters lead to creation (妖)as well as destruction(花)
 
 
That commences a reincarnation and redemption (虫)
 
 
Little Red Riding Hood dancing to a new destination(岛)

 

 


 

 

 


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最西边的岛上
赞灵美眉的不懈努力!!! 谢谢哈 :)
妖妖灵
西岛美眉英文功底太深啦! 大家一起写歌词,那么难的事情居然变得如此轻松简单!欧耶!这次的歌曲更完整一些:)
妖妖灵
不是努力,是玩儿:)
最西边的岛上
夸奖过分就是折磨啦,担当不起哈!其实是非专业又非常胆怯,以前从未做过,一点点儿小心试,觉得难了就害怕了躲起来了哈;)
妖妖灵
哈哈,说实话,这也是我们第一次玩:)
甜虫虫
This piece is really nice! It has light-hearted fun memories

breezy afternoon, azure sky, fish nibbling feet, cicada's chorus, flower garden, and birds' singing paint a vivid picture of peaceful and sensory experience of childhood. 

There is a shift in sentiments in the second stanza. This change gives this piece a sensory depth and adds a philosophical layer to the poem, thanks to Yi Hua :)

甜虫虫
It's really fun to collaborate on poem or lyrics writing.
甜虫虫
You never know where it is going and how it will end :)
甜虫虫
XiDao's closing verse is brilliant! Thanks for the fun!
妖妖灵
虫虫 is so talented!I admire ur English! Excellent summary!
妖妖灵
Couldn't agree with u more!Unexpectedsurprising,drawdropping
妖妖灵
Happy fairy tale ending!:)
妖妖灵
Just like English reading of 7997!:)
甜虫虫
Right. And it goes so smoothly well with the previous verse!
甜虫虫
Yeah, definitely. That makes it so interesting :)
甜虫虫
Thanks for your generous compliment :) However,

 I never consider myself talented. 

 

妖妖灵
不识庐山真面目,只缘身在此山中!:)
甜虫虫
Very nice reading! I listened to his audios before.

 He has a cute British accent. :)

妖妖灵
What I mean is he read“yin”&“yang” today:)
甜虫虫
haha, thanks! Have a great weekend!

I'm going to see cicadas next week, trillions of cicadas :)

Now you know where I got the idea about cicadas screaming. :)

甜虫虫
I see. I haven't had time to listen to it yet.
妖妖灵
In China?把你的评语搬到主贴里了:)
暖冬cool夏
Surprise!接龙能接出这么高的水平:))妖mm组织得好,AI也很给力!
甜虫虫
No, not China.Luckily we don’t need to go so far to see them

https://www.nbcchicago.com/cicadas-illinois-chicago-2024/yes-cicadas-are-still-emerging-in-illinois-heres-how-long-it-could-last/3449854/?amp=1
 

Thanks for including my humble comment in the main post. :)

移花接木
haha,no mater where I go, PPR nature I am
妖妖灵
我也被惊掉了下巴!:暖冬mm的第一句接得真是又快又出色!alliteration被AI一唱,效果这么酷!下次接着玩!
妖妖灵
哈哈,这叫对比修辞,考虑周到!知道另一个英文表达么:wet blanket!和虫虫学的!:)
暖冬cool夏
哈哈,谢谢妖mm谬赞!还是AI最牛!